Again, the characters were very in-character, and I really liked this one. I always love it when you write about Kai and Tala interacting, and this series of events seems like it could have really taken place in the show. It shows the tension within the team and the internal conflict of the characters very well. I really enjoyed it. Good work.

that was really good

OMG! This is excellent! Just one question... Wasn't this a song-fic before? What happened to the lyrics? It was even better (as impossible as it seems) with the lyrics, so why did you take them out? Anyway, perfectly in character and really, really good! _

I thought it was very in character, from the ice cold glares, to their silence. I love how you use their thoughts on each other and about them not having to use words to understand each other. I thought this was a very good outlook on how the team was thinking about Kai during the tournament. Wonderful oneshot!

0_0 wow... you did a great job! Awesome, I felt like they wer ein character! 3

i think it's in charater and i like how you changed the piont of view between the charaters.

Lovely! I love Linkin Park!

So I have to point something out...

"Cultured my cure"

It's acutally "CLUTCHING my cure". Small mistake, but overall... *squeall* so good!

'cultured my cure'

Um, sorry, but these are the wrong lyrics, it's 'clutching my cure'. Sorry, it's just that i'm a LP fan, so...

REALLY GOOD! i'm gonna check out your other stuff.

that was great! even though Kai/ Tala fluff would be great as well *hinthint* maybe a sequel? keep up the gd work!

Riko

Another One-Shot? C'mon girl, you have to let me have some glory -_-

Blah. Anyway, as usual, I loved this. I love everything you write. Maybe you should write something bad for once so I can say something else.

Blah, blah, blah, the layout was good, everyone was in character..Not enough Bry, but hey, There's never enough Bry. I don't read the lyrics..never do unless I know the song.

Loved this, but hurry up and update Infiltration! .

The Always Lovely

Chibi_Lothlen

The story fit very nicely with the song. Both Kai and Tala seemed pretty much in character. And I really like that last sentence. :)

AW! Make more song fics! I love song fics! And I love your stories!