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| BabyGlover 2006-11-29 ch 3, | abusekeep it going |
| watergurl123 2006-10-05 ch 3, | abuseah this was such a great story but u haven't updated in forever! that sux lol if u ever do i will definitely be waitin to read it :D |
| BabyKat Felton 2005-10-28 ch 3, | abuseHey there. This is a great story. I love Rory/Jess and you are doing a great job writing it. Rory wasn't being to melodramatic...don't listen to whoever said that. Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon kay?? BabyKat Felton |
| mrs.patrickdrake 2005-07-18 ch 3, | abusethat was good!! i LOVE jess and rory! PLZ CONTINUE!UPDATE!! |
| L.M. Nelson 2005-05-28 ch 3, | abusegood, good story, hope to see more. |
| Ferret Love 2005-05-26 ch 3, | abuseSWEET UODATE SOON!! |
| lilyLOVESwb 2005-03-30 ch 3, | abuseHI! I love your fic! I hope you will update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens...I hope Lorelai or Luke will find out...or it would be funny if nobody but them new for a while lol update please! bye lily |
| Utopist 2005-03-29 ch 3, | abuseAw... continue, please... I really wanna see a very mad Dean engage in a losing round of fisticuffs with Jess... who of course will win... ok. Stopping the immature and childish Dean hating now. I think this fic has potential, as long as it keeps going like this and they all stay in character. Unless, of course, you decide to end it here... but continuing will make me, and a bunch of other lits, very very happy... :) M. |
| nakedmolerat 2005-03-27 ch 3, | abuseis this the end of the story? i am new in fanfiction and i love gilmore girls but i certainly hate dean becuse he is so serius...i love the idea o jess and !good one! (one thing i dont think taht in real life which this isnt rory will kiss jess while he is asleep) * i think you need to continue the story* |
| smile1 2005-03-27 ch 3, | abuseHey, This chapter wasn't as good as your last chapter because I thought that some of the characters weren't as character as they could be. Take Jess for instance, he was incredibly in character in some parts, like in this paragraph where you captured his thoughts excellent: The last night had been painful for him. To have her so close to him but without being able to do what he wanted. He had kissed her and she had kissed him back, but he didn’t think she meant it. He had almost taken advantage of her; she had been asleep. Afterwards he had lain awake, against her, imagining what it would be like to have her in that position for other reasons. He had imagined she was there not because she was cold and needed his body heat, but because she wanted him, and wanted to be pressed against him. The thought had caused his whole body to stiffen and Rory to shift. After that, he decided it would be best not to think about her at all. He had eventually gotten to sleep. This was an amazing piece of writing, intriguing to read, too, though not all of the dialogue and paragraphs were just as in character. However, everything was well written and still enjoyable to read. Bye, smile :-) |
| Kylie1403 2005-03-27 ch 3, | abuseomg update and YAY no more dean dean is too whiney |
| Bittersweetbloodbaby 2005-03-26 ch 3, | abuseBeauteous. Now, if you could just explain the chapter titles to me, I'd be all set. |
| misslove852 2005-03-26 ch 3, | abuseaww! i love it! keep it going! |
| Encarta 2005-03-26 ch 3, | abuseI love this plot. It's a great plot. I'm glad Dean is history and you seem to have some Javajunkie going on. It's all really good. The situation with the heaters is great and the kiss at the end! I think this is your best story yet. |
| coffeechick 2005-03-25 ch 2, | abuseOy vey! HeHeHe. Chapter 2 takes me back to December when a major snow/ice storm hit here. LOL. Similiar...just without the Jess part. Bah. :( Anyways I'm hooked, I love the plot and the whole concept behind it. And the writing is amazing. Keep up the great work. :0) |