Wow. I can feel the angst and despair in this. You have done a fine job with this poem!

O,this is good.I give you props..XD

*Eternal Flames AR*

You weren't kidding when you said you liked angst. The poem defenatly plays on emotion and gets your brain thinking and I like that in a poem.

I do think its a little OOC for Shadow to be thinking rather cruely tward what I assume is mariea (damn I still can't spell). I cant complain and I always enjoy reading your stuff.

That definitely sounds like Shadow! It's pretty good.

Well, you got me wondering. Most likely it was Shadow, but the way you described Maria, seems a little cruel... I think it may be Sonic, but Super Sonic does not cry...

Sigh.

O.o ooh prity... urr i mean COOL!

this was supposed to be for you? Creepy in a can! Pst... I changed that one story to PG-13! I think they can live with it now! _ I liked this poem! I think it is MARIA! No... SHADOW! Its always Shadowfor this stuff... Or Sonic or Amy... BUT THATS IT! And since you hate pink that rules out Amy... So its Shadow or Sonic! Since Sonic likes Amy... Amy is pink... SO THAT MEANS IT WAS SHADOW! I AM A GENIUS! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! good luck with stuff! see ya

Nice...and angsty! just the way i like it! Keep writing!