OMG! This was such a cute story! I Loved It! It's so sweet! Too bad it didn't happen in the show, HUH? LOL I really think you should consider a sequel or something! Great job! *Nicole

It was a good fan fic on ow they both got to that point it was good.

Very good story. I think you've captured the emotions of both very well. I hope to read more from you.

INCREDIBLE! you wrote such a good story. i really enjoyed reading it. you style of writing is great. keep on writing!