Brilliant! Kurda being the smartass that he is, lol. And the part with Darren and Mr. Crepsley was so adorable!

wow...that was...

AWESOME

OMG that was awesome! awesomely awesome awesomely awesome oh so awesome ya this is awesome reallyliked it sing song voice la la la hm hm hm awsomely awesome...

yeah,...

it wasnt boring!1

This is NOT dull. It's intelligent, well-written, and ...er... really good! I enjoyed it immensely in a brainy sort of way. I even liked it better than your SteveDarren fics (and that's saying a lot. I love that pairing!).

OHO THEY'RE PLAYING WIZARDS' CHESS.

That is a really cool story... I like it that Darren and Mr Crepsley get back together. YAY! And Kurda's so cool! YAY! Will you write another chapter please?

interestng to say the least.

Amazing! Brilliant and wonderful piece. Kurda being a smartass and winning the game (even though it might be a just a bit because he was distracting Tiny) made me laugh. Take that, short bootwearing man! XD

Also, the mention of Darren and Crepsley made my knees go soft. *is a sap*

That was... a nice story to relax with. It just helps to read a little random thing which has nothing to do with war, fighting, and m-m. But why is Mr. Tiny allowed in Paradise, I wonder?

YES. I am BACK from Grandma's house and what a perfect surprise I get Even though i didn't understand it because I'm not smart enough to grasp such scientific stuff I enjoyed it. Yay.