That is... tragic. The last thing she thinks is "the future is bright." then she dies. Tragic... I love it. x Smaginn

Oh. Oh.
That was so heart-wrenchingly sad. I can't even begin to say. How do you do it? How, HOW do you write like that?!
The way you set it up, with all of Lily's expectations, all her hopes and dreams, all her plans, and then the final bombshell at the end - it was just...tragic. Or something like that, because I don't know what to say.
Excellent, excellent job.

Great!! The ending was so wonderful!

bloody hell that was brilliant... i mean that was so beautifully written i'm almost speachless... almost ^^ keep going with this, its a brillaint idea and you write it so well, good luck ^^
SP

Nicely written, I'm impressed!