This was a magnificent story! Well done!

I LOVE your style for short stories, have I ever told you that? D

Brilliant. I love the writing style; it's difficult, but it really gets Maglor's state of mind across. Well done . . . and I still hope to see more of "Elsewhere" one day.

I think the story is excellent; I absolutely love the way you writes (how you can use all the descriptive and fancy words and yet make the story plain, with a touch of melancholy). The characterization of Maglor is about as perfect as I can imagine. However, I feel that this story will be made a lot better if you use more punctuation and divide the sentences.