Reviews for life, undermined

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HopelessRomantic93 2006-06-30 ch 6,	abuseoh my heck i freaking love alias! and your chapters are a VERY nice length, and they're not like all those other short chapters! its very enjoyable to read, and i hope you update soon!
HoPeLeSs Or A rOmAnTiC 2006-04-19 ch 6,	abusegreat chappie! i like how they are physically attracted to each other and not anything else. and why does everybody keep saying, well typing, the word woot? if you have any explanation or any answer at all please reply in your next chapter because i am determined to find out.
ackles-shackles 2005-12-29 ch 6,	abusethat rocked pleaz write more
vaughnfan 2005-12-22 ch 6,	abuseHeya! I seriously love this story. Like, love it! It's the bomb :D The whole love/hate relationship between Sydney and Vaughn has lots of potential - in a good way! I can't wait to read more, so please update soon. Till next time then :P
Janelle 2005-10-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseEh, it's OK. Could stand some proofreading and editing, plus more detail in places.
Gewher 2005-10-28 ch 6,	abusehaha! Great! I love it! I can't stand love at first sight things either! It's gotta be love/hate or friends first!! Anyway I hope you update soon cause I love this fic!
alexis 2005-10-15 ch 6, anon.	abuseUPDATE!
An Adult 2005-10-15 ch 6, anon.	abuseDear WHINY spoiled brat, Wah! Wah! Someone was mean to me! Wah! Wah! My God, I can hear your bawling across the continent. What an immature little snotbox you are. Oh, and considering that you're actually 16? You should be able to write better than this. I cut you a bit of a break when I thought you were only 15, but 16 is definitely old enough to do better.
An Adult 2005-10-15 ch 6, anon.	abuseDear WHINY spoiled brat, Wah! Wah! Someone was mean to me! Wah! Wah! My God, I can hear your bawling across the continent. What an immature little snotbox you are. Oh, and considering that you're actually 16? You should be able to write better than this. I cut you a bit of a break when I thought you were only 15, but 16 is definitely old enough to do better.
An Adult 2005-10-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseDear spoiled brat, You wrote, "And I never said this was a canon story anyway, obviously. -is fuming-" Kiddie, if you can't take constructive criticism, don't post on a public forum where such comments are allowed and actually even encouraged by the webmaster. Getting pissy when you DO get such comments is a blazing sign of immaturity. Instead of whining and behaving like a little brat, why don't you TRY to be mature and consider if the reviews contain good points that can help improve your writing? Considering that you're 15, your writing isn't too bad. Your attitude, though, reeks.
aliaslover14 2005-10-01 ch 2,	abusecan't wait for the next chapter! update soon
Julia 2005-09-13 ch 6, anon.	abuseyay, you updated! happy. great chapter. I'm still wondering if Vaughn does had a brain tumor growing... cause that'd suck big time. anyway, update... again... in the near future... preferably very very soon... like tomorrow... or now. -Julia
Kirs-t 2005-09-09 ch 6, anon.	abuseHey mate! I'm really loving this story and I can't wait to read more of it! Yay! Keep up the good writing.
s 2005-09-08 ch 6, anon.	abusefeel better and update soon... i like how they are gradually getting along.
me 2005-09-07 ch 6, anon.	abusei love this fic as much as the rest of the fics you've written. i'm looking forward to updates on everything you've written. you're a great writer, please continue! you're the best alias fic writer i've read (not kidding).

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