'"Are we going for prizes now?" Jak said sarcastically'

RHP: Haha I love when an author throws in a tiny bit of humor in a depressing story... But this is a awesome-ly great depressing story... I LOVE YOUR WORK! :)

i really like this fic.

Dark, evil, villainous, and a nice little speech at the end. Sounds like an episode of The Twilight Zone. Good job.

make many more chapters please

WOW. This amazed me, really, it did. I am a sucker for dark fics, and this tickled me fancy. SO MUCH. The raw emotion in Keira and Jak's confrontation left me speechless, BRAVO!

man you make jak sound like a mean jerky player

jak and ashilin hell no ashlin is a little u know wat and torn is to thats why those two are perfect together. jak and keira all the way aint even gona read the rest of this.have a nice day

Does Keira die? (I do realize that you can't actually answer me since I refuse to leave my email, I'm paraniod of that kind of thing) I'm sad now, Jak is sad, I enjoyed the darkness of the story though.

Keira kills Ashelin? I always knew that there'd be a problem with those two, but murder? Why doesn't Keira think of Erol, and how being with him made Jak feel? I realize that I'm asking a lot of questions, but Ashelin made Jak happy, wouldn't Keira want Jak to be happy?

that is so cool! its is perfect! So murdering! So gothic! Man you really rock with the story Quick-demon! I love it! it is so cool! Keira killing Ashelin Praxis for taking Jak away. that is cool! you did better than me! that was gold! Really gold! You rock!

~Silver Horror

not bad...I suppose it could of had a little more fighting but I guess I'm just one who loves blood and gory. Still, vey nicely written and I loved it

it wasn't so bad, it was good,for me

omg that as probably the sadest thing I've ever read in J&D fics. And it didn't help one bit that while I was reading it I had D.H.T, Listen To Your Heart, on repeat. That just made it all the sadder. Excuse me... -stops crying and starts throwing things at Jak- lil bastard. I actually felt more for Keria then Jak as I hated ND for that last damn scene in 3 (damn game desiners!). And WTF you killed Keria!

Later... -is way to emotionaly drained-

I LOVE JAK KEIRA FICS! I also dislike Jak/Ashelin, because it is only lust people! Okay, yeah, I like this stuff.

I love how you write things very symbolic good story