 AkiChan323 2009-11-26 . chapter 14I have only one correction for you here...
Gaara doesn't have eyebrows! Its true, check him out in the manga!
So when you said that Gaara raised his eyebrow, I was all like "Wait a second, Gaara doesnt have any!" I was totally confused for a moment there lol
other than that I loved this chapter! Im gonna finish this fic today hopefully.
Loving the NaruGaa-ness and NaruNeji-ness, I am a huge fan of NaruGaa NaruNeji and NaruSasu...I've only recently began to like NaruSai (which is okay I guess really funny though) Man, Everybody has turned Naruto into a man-whore! lmao! They pair him with every man, woman (and I've seen animals, EW! DX) in the entire manga! Ive seen him paired with Ino and Temari! BLECH!
You're an awesome writer btw! I may just read some of your other stuff after this!
~AkiChan323~ |
 SukiByTwilight 2009-11-22 . chapter 24First thing first, I freaking love you! XD
The is like one of the most amazing NaruSasu fanfics ever written.
I read this whole thing in one day starting from 12pm till 2am.
This fanfic had me sitting on the edge of my seat and with every chapter it had me drooling for more.
Really I so totally in love with this you have no idea.
I love your writing style and how you express every character perfectly.
The humor had me cracking up so loud my mum had to tell me to shut the hell up over a million times today.
The different songs you put in the story matched very well. And it gave me new favorite songs :]
And the last chapter...the ending scenes...the garden and the grave yard...I was crying my eyes out. So beautifully written I had to read them both over twice.
Yep you made my day totally perfect except that I have only about 5 hours left before I got to wake up for school but it was worth it, very minute of it :D
Good Job! Keep on writing~!
<3 <3 <3
P.S. Also your link for the smut version doesn’t work for some reason...I really wanna read it so can you please give me another link if you can *pouty eyes* pretty-please with Sasuke on top XD Oh and where can I find the Russian translated versions of your fanfics? |
 Munfarid 2009-11-21 . chapter 24 That was absolute utter perfection. It was, without a doubt, the best fanfiction I've ever read, and quite possibly one of the best stories i've read. The due attention to detail, the character development of not only the main characters, but minor characters as well, and the dynamic nature of Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is all a work of art. The additions you made to the story (the horse rides and drag shows to be specific) showed great knowledge of every aspect of the subjects. The story kept moving, never taking too much time on one subject, but at the same time never rushing into the next plot point. Naruto and Sasuke's characters were both just like that of the show, and the few additions made to them both contributed to their charm and didn't at all dimish the recognizable factors in them. In all honesty, if it wasn't for the fact that Naruto is copyrighted, i would ask you to seriously consider publishing this story.
I've enjoyed Chasing Naruto to the fullest. Thank you for the amazing experience, and I look forward to reading the stories you write in the future.
-Munfarid |
 Ryan.Thomas 2009-11-19 . chapter 24This is officially my favorite Narusasu fic ever. I love your writing you are so awesome. I read your story for like 3 days straight, lol. Naruto and Sasuke were really in character in this fic. I especially liked how you wrote Naruto. Wonderful story you did a great job. |
 Kyoko kitty-chan 2009-10-26 . chapter 24This is seriously a late review but oh well, better late than never. ;)
I love this fan fiction even though I'm not really a fan of NaruSasu.
It's fantastically written and the ending was really sweet, I loved the competition between Sasuke, Neji, and Gaara. It was really interesting and entertaining and Naruto was always hilarious. XD
Great job overall. =) |
 Loveless22Beloved 2009-10-25 . chapter 24Oh My God! This was an amazing freaking story! I'm in love! i just sat down over the past three days or so and read the whole thing i had my laughs and i had my OMG moments but i n short i loved it it was extremely well written and i may even go back and read it again. Great Job on this i loved it! |
 Hayako Hikari 2009-10-22 . chapter 24A really amazing work, t's one of the best i've read until now, thank you so much for sharing your amazing story ^^
btw love the final |
 Naruo_713 2009-10-10 . chapter 6 My.. my.. you're are awesome. This series could be the best fic I've read so far. (thumbs up) |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-10-09 . chapter 24This was so great! Really nice job on everything! |
 Alteegry 2009-10-09 . chapter 24This fiction is a masterpiece. It may be the best fiction I've ever read, and only God knows how many I've read so far. |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-10-09 . chapter 23Aw. One more chapter left. This has been awesome from the beginning to the end! |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-10-09 . chapter 22Oh damn. Naruto is going to be pissed about the bet! Can't wait to read more! |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-10-09 . chapter 21Hopefully they make up. I seriously thought Naruto was kinda of leading them on as well. He shouldn't have messed with their hearts like that. Nice chapter! |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-10-09 . chapter 20Damn. Why the hell did Sasuke have to mess things up??!! Great chapter. I would love to see those boys in drag! |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-10-09 . chapter 19I went to a drag show just the other night. They are so incredibly awesome! It's so much fun as well. I think everyone should go! |