what happens in the forest? what happens?

Hmmm, interesting. I thought that the lady was Harry's mom (Lily, the whole leaving a flower thing...) but she had green eyes and reddish hair I think so that wouldn't work. It was also kinda hard to tell where the POV switched, and who was talking-work on your spacing. Other than that, it was a great intro and I think you should definitely write more!

Hehe. Weird! But, I liked it.

really weird

This was ok, after all. Just continue, so we can see where the story goes, I want to know who that lady was.

HI! I thought it was good! Write more, I wanna see where it goes. Love Ya ;)

Cool! Thank god for Harry punching Golye.