Oh, Teyla made interesting! I am pretty sure that she didn't kill him, but what would this do to their relationship? I like your little one-shots.

I agree with Raquedan and Purplyin. Very compelling. Love your style of writing. Very descriptive.

I think you just gave me a heart attack. That was really, amazingly cool. Very forceful.

Umm, that was... forcefull. Not the writing but the style. Very interesting.

i don't really? watch the show but it was a story by you so it had to be read but maybe becuase i don't watch the show i am now confused
did he die or was she dreaming

Oh, very powerful. You had me going too. I really thought it was about "one" thing and it was about something altogether different. (I won't say just in case others read the reviews before the story like I do.)

You had a few typos, but nothing to detract from the plot. Very well done. When I realized what was happening at the end my first thought was "Oh, no! Not THAT!"

Very well done. Please, write more.

ooh, wonderful. raw and needy and dark - love this fic. Is it teyla/shep? not so into them but this was excellent, really and truly.