oh!
it's so sweet at the end.
i love the adorable have be mad on yami.

Heeheehee. my my, will there be a story that writes about the rest...

I really loved it. Great story.

Poor Yugi. I hope Yami tells his secret to Yugi soon.

cute, love, sadness, it made ME cry. nice job. i LOVED it.

I love it, I wish you could do a lemon scene though.

Once again, you've written a great story! Loved it!Oh, and if you do give rights to someone to write a sequel to this story, please put it on your profile or e-mail us! Thanks!

WOOT! Yes, that was great! I'm so glad that I'm randomly going to everyone's profiles tonight, otherwise I would have never known that this story was finished!

It was so cute! And I'm glad that Jou gave Yami the what for. ::stares::

:D...

So...yeah! Great two-shot!

AH! The cuteness never ends does it? Well that was so adorable!

This was really good! The ending was cute in a slightly perverted sense xD The only thing is... You kept changing from Joey to Jounouchi throughout the story. It was kinda odd... But everything else was great! Loved it!

That poem was good.
Anyway, I like the plotline in this fic! Great work!

lol, cute story ^_^

I liked this story so much, it inspired me! you rock!!
^-^

I like this, please update soon!

Me: HA! Wonderful. Lovely. Yami and Yugi -- definetly my favorite pairing.

Altariel: Except you and Seto.

Me: Ah, yes, cept for me and Seto. Tee-hee.