KimyouTeki,

Listen to me. Listen carefully. I have been a fan of YUGIOH for YEARS. I had fallen out of this fandom years ago, because of the horrible fanfiction I had encountered. Quite frankly. This fanfiction is one of the only AMAZING, WELL WRITTEN YUGIOH fanfictions on all of the internet.

I am not kidding, I am not stroking your ego. All that's left now are 'decent' fics, and maybe if I'm lucky, some 'good' ones. That's all there is left. This is...By far the greatest one I have EVER...and I really mean EVER read. Listen. Please. I'm BEGGING you...this from a fangirl who had lost all hope in YGO fanfiction...Please, please just update. Just...just update and finish this story.

I have been reading fanfiction, reviewing it and such for over 5 years now. And I can honestly say without any sort of a doubt, that I have never, NEVER. NEVER! wanted someone to update THIS much. I know, I know, it's been years since you updated. I know. But please, just dig into yourself and remember your old ideas...finish this.

I read this fic once when I was younger, at least a chapter or two, and today during my search for an, at least DECENT fic a memory of this came back to me...I've spent the last 3 hours reading this through...I think I might've damaged my eyes, but I DONT CARE.

Please, please, PLEASE, at the very LEAST for ME and your loyal fans...Just...just update this. Finish this. God more then anything I want you to finish this.

I don't think I've EVER begged like this in a review. But I'm really begging you, please just finish it.

I'm going to read the sequel now...You might find a similar review there.

PLEASE. I know it's been almost 2 years, but really? Your writing could have only IMPROVED in that time. I really, really am begging you here. If I could get on my KNEES I think I would.

Just...just please, please update.

PLEASE.

poor Fluffy...and Malik, and Ryou...AHH! I dont know who to feel sorry for. All their lives have pretty much gone to crap. And if Ryou can come back, he'll be leaving Kura behind...who killed him. wow, thats screwed up. big time.
Kudos
-s.o

well, i've read up to this chaps. (35) and this is absolutely awesome. it's creepier then the movie was at some points! really, i had to stop and check behind me, i was reading with no lights on.
Good luck with those dreams though, sounds like you need it need it mor then I do at this point.^.^
night!
-s.o

IT TOOK YOU WAY TO FUGGING LONG TO UPDATE GOD DAMN IT! GAH!

Long time no see *glare* and you start a seguel before you finish?...It makes up for lack of update :)

Great work as ALWAYS *bows before you* I am not worthy, but I beg and plead for frequent updates.

...*snuggles suguru*

If you include him ever in your stories, at least don't kill HIM *cries*

hey you updated I was wondering when you would. I really need to update myself. I've been so busy and things having been going well, anyway great chapter, I'm starting to get a little confused on exactly who Rebeca really is, update really soon okay.

Poor Guys. I feel so bad for all of them. Good chapter.

>_< i didnt know you updated!! why didnt my alert come up?!?!?! GYAA!

i'm soo happy to be reading this after such a long time!

O_O! Are they really dead...? ...That is both awesome and not. Again, I love this story~

O_O! This isn't the ending, right? Is there going to be a happy ending or a sad one? I love this story. *FAV*

I love this fic. It's so.. eerie. I hope you get around to finishing it!

Your story is so cool! I love Yu-Gi-Oh, I love Gravitation, and I love The Ring (uhm... well... yeah)! Please update soon! ^__^

Oh my. Good chapter. Really good. Creepy too.

The ending though. Wow. It was good. Poor Ryou and Bakura. But like Bakura said at least their souls will be safe.

Good job!

Yay Bakura! Good for him for going to save the one he loves.

Poor Poor Ryou. But don't worry. Bakura is on his way!

Rebecca still a bitch but she is a good antagonist.

Kaiba has serious problems. The "You didn't think I'd let you die that easily, did you?" line is proof.

Being buried and now having plastic over the face. That is rough.

Someone has a crush on Yugi! Too bad they are basically possessed at the moment.

Bakura is quite a hurry but he has every right too. Go save Ryou!

That is not nice. Destroying other property is wrong. Like Rebecca cares about that though.

Ha, Rebecca's plan backfired. I like that little part. Kind of comic reliefish.

Shadi is weird but at least he got the items from Rebecca.

Good ending again.

Good thinking on Ryou's part.

It would really suck to be Kaiba at the moment. Poor Kaiba.

And now poor Ryou. Rebecca is sure a bitch.

Ok Kaiba has issues. Big ones if he kept his brother alive. That is weird.

Shadow Realm. Nice.

Poor poor Ryou. Being buried alive. That is cruel.

Good ending as always!

Ryou! Bakura! NO. Well I guess that was better then Samara killing them. Wow I've been waiting for an update for this. I forget and Marik and Malik still alive? update soon, lol I really need to update mine sometime.