its kinda not finished but pretty good

Whoa.

Now that was a fantastically-written story. So true, especially the whole crushes-you-get-at-age-nine concept. ::fangirls you and story::

This was really great! A true angst. YEAH!

OH, I like this even tho I don't do femmeslash

wwhhoaa how did this HAPPEN! whoa

charlotte?

update

add more chapters

anything

Charlotte/Stacey! It can see it in the cards. I love your depiction of teen Charlotte-I can see Charlotte growing up from the odd girl out to a girl who is still the odd girl out...but who is wiser, weaker, and...more pathetic than she has ever been before.

*_*

I do believe I have officially started to adore femme slash.

This is severely angsty. But I think it is awesome. I never thought about how that almost-sisters thing would work out, but you got me thinking. Is there going to be more?

aww. i liked this. i hope it isn't a one-shot, even tho it would make a lot of sense if it was.

So realistic. I can definitely see this happening, Stacey growing up and having her own life, leaving behind Stonybrooke for New York, etc. How long do those types of relationships last, anyway? Eck, poor Charlotte.

Well on a lighter note. I actually remember that time capsel, which is amazing because its been years and years and years since I've actually read a BSC book. But why did you make her so crazy and cruel. I can understand a teenage girl looking at a childhood thing like that as dumb, but Charlote made a total 180. I really wish she could be a little happier. But its your fic. Ahnd besides the fact that I don't like her like that, it was written very well. You definitely can get into someones head and write it well. Great diction and such.

Lovely and wonderful.

I especially love this line:

"Last Christmas Charlotte saw her across the street and looked away so that they could avoid the awkwardness how-are-you-doing meaningless chatter thing that takes over when people stop being friends or almost-sisters (fuck) or even babysitter and charge, when they turn into people that used to have something."

Very true to life. The story has a beautiful flow and hits dead on the emotions that come with the dissolution of a friendship. Absolute perfection.

Shit, poor Charlotte. I guess you can't be a sweetie forever.

good stuff! loved the anger and the retrospect...nice work

Pure fucking brilliance. I love it, love it, love it. I adore Charlotte and there's not nearly enough fic written about her.

And, yeah, I can see Charlotte and Becca now that I think about it.

More BSC from you, please? Preferably Charlotte-centric. Not that I dislike your Kristy/Dawn stuff.

This is perfect.