good job on the story. a bit of a cheesy ending but hey i liked it. also good job on your fight scene.

Great story! this *cries* out for a sequel! further adventures in SEF and Vegeta finally falls (hard of course) for somebody!

Great story as usuall. You should make a sequal so that way they learn of earth and meet roshi and crew. they should also learn how to go super saya-jin(sp?)

only one thing I have to say. Where's the sequel. Just loved that fic

I loved it! It was so funny and amazingly well-written. I wish I could write like that!

That was pretty interesting! Kakarot was pretty much in character (held against Goku) and Vegeta, as always, seemed pretty much in character. I enjoyed this fic from beginning to end. And didn't you mention it was your first attempt at strictly DBZ? It was great. _ I can easily see where this would lead to side-stories. _

Is it just me or is Vegeta out of character? Good story though.

A nice slightly fluffy fic... I likey!