To be posted 14 May 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.

KOTOR aboard Ebon Hawk: They speak and things get better.

The piece could have used some polishing, but that’s all I noticed in the way of reviewing.

With Juhani Mission has something no one else on the ship has, someone who has been there, done that, and lived to tell the tale. It’s a problem soldiers have a lot when they come home. Everyone wants to ‘hear’ the war stories, but how many of them have experienced it? That experience is a bond nothing can break.

I honestly adore the idea of a friendship between Juhani and Mission and I thought that this fic was a brilliant start to such a thing, starting with a common homeworld. Really nice, neko. :)

I thought this was rather good. Mission and Juhani are two characters that are very underused in kotor fanfic, so it is nice to see a fic that puts the spotlight on them. Since they were both natives of Taris, it would be entirely natural for the two of them to have this conversation.

Anyway, nice work.

Nice fic! :)

It's simple and it works very well. I'm pretty sure that part really took place in the events outside what the game shows us. Perfect.

Hey man, very good story. Nice stuff, but I found only one problem:

Taris was never destreoyed as a planet.

Sure, all the buildings and technology lie in ruin, but the planet IS still there. you jsut cant go to it because of a little something called No Docking bay. I looked into the thing, being a light jedi, and it said in completed quests that no building was left, yet Survivers would be very difficult to locate.

So, yeah, other than that, flawless.

Good to see some interaction between the NPCs. K2 made me miss them even more... :cry: Oh, yeah. Thanks for the review!