Read this on aff.net and loved it. I normally don't go with Naru/Gaa/Sasu but the way you've portrayed the characters is so wonderful that I am going to stay on this fic just to see what happens next.

I am wondering (more like worried) about this fic since it hasn't been updated in almost 7 years.

I know how Real Life can be to authors (my friends and I have been writing a fanfic since we were in middle school and we're about mid-20s now and haven't gotten further than the starting point basically because of RL getting in the way) so I don't want you to feel pressured to put out a chapter but I would really love it if you could give us readers an update to know that this story is still alive and not abandoned or forgotten (which I have unfortunately seen way to many times).

Hoping to see an update soon. Ja ne _

P.S. surprisingly I love your portrayal of Gaara the most. Not that I have anything against him but I usually only read SasuNaru fics (well in the Naruto world that is) that focus on either Naruto or Sasuke or both. And for a first time reader of a Gaara point of view or at least an insight to him I have to say that I am really loving him more than the others right now. You make him seem so real it's just fun to see what happens next with him.

please update this story i really want to know what happens

Hope you update soon!xD

hmm interesting relationship that gaara and naruto have with their demons

I love you! Sasuke the cabin boys is the best thing ever, that could be a story in its self. I loke how you do the sand sibs, the way you described their rooms was way cool! I hope that you stioll have more chapters coming...way past October, lol, np

I'm sad that this is a dead story. You've got an excellent set-up and a good grasp of character.

Livi

This is such an awesome story. I know it's probably dead, but I really enjoyed it, and wanted to let you know. It's one of the very few fanfics that actually read like a stand-alone story, with it's own plot, not "fill in the missing pieces of the source material" or "rewrite the source material" or "showing how my openion of the source material is the best, i.e _ is the coolest character of all." I know it's incrediably hard to write unique plots, so I'm not surprised you wound up dropping it, but what you did write is pretty darn incrediable. Thanks for writing and sharing-it made my day.

DOOD... SERIOUSLY. I hate sasuuke... Meh... Lol keep em up! This fic's great! WRITE! WRITE!

Big fan:

Mariana

OK, Thats IT. -HUGS- IM UR NEWEST FAN! :D U fucking rock, and no, I cant say a phrase at 3:30 am without cursing!

With U.F.O's

Mariana

This was pretty good. At first I thought you were gonna make Kankurou Kazekage, but I'm glad you at least have Gaara as a possibility. The Sand's political system seems fine and Sasuke doesn't seem completely out of character. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Love the dialoge. Seems like it could actually happen. The thought of Sasuke jumping on a ship and just leaving never really occured to me. Very nice! Can't wait for the next to come out and can't wait for Kyuubi and Naruto to strike up another conversation. It makes me smile.

I thrive off OOC-ness. Feel free to alter anything you feel necessary. I'll read it anyway. _

I luff your story muchly. If this story is anything to judge by you're pretty awesome too. *adds story to SA list*

If you need anything message me. I'll assist you in any way I can.

of course I love you! I'd love you even more if you update this wonderful fic sooner! *wink*

luvs! sorry i didn't review on the other chapters, but i love all of them. keep it up! i don't see anything wrong with it. might just be that i can't write, but i do read alot and i still think its great! i love the names you made up. funny! XD

I love this fic! *flails* The characterization is great, and I love the situation in Sand. Awesome work with this. Please do write more soon!

firedraygon97