I love you! Sasuke the cabin boys is the best thing ever, that could be a story in its self. I loke how you do the sand sibs, the way you described their rooms was way cool! I hope that you stioll have more chapters coming...way past October, lol, np

I'm sad that this is a dead story. You've got an excellent set-up and a good grasp of character.

Livi

This is such an awesome story. I know it's probably dead, but I really enjoyed it, and wanted to let you know. It's one of the very few fanfics that actually read like a stand-alone story, with it's own plot, not "fill in the missing pieces of the source material" or "rewrite the source material" or "showing how my openion of the source material is the best, i.e _ is the coolest character of all." I know it's incrediably hard to write unique plots, so I'm not surprised you wound up dropping it, but what you did write is pretty darn incrediable. Thanks for writing and sharing--it made my day.

DOOD... SERIOUSLY. I hate sasuuke... Meh... Lol keep em up! This fic's great! WRITE! WRITE!!
Big fan:
Mariana

OK, Thats IT. -HUGS- IM UR NEWEST FAN! :D U fucking rock, and no, I cant say a phrase at 3:30 am without cursing! ^^
With U.F.O's
Mariana

This was pretty good. At first I thought you were gonna make Kankurou Kazekage, but I'm glad you at least have Gaara as a possibility. The Sand's political system seems fine and Sasuke doesn't seem completely out of character. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Love the dialoge. Seems like it could actually happen. The thought of Sasuke jumping on a ship and just leaving never really occured to me. Very nice! Can't wait for the next to come out and can't wait for Kyuubi and Naruto to strike up another conversation. It makes me smile.^^

I thrive off OOC-ness. Feel free to alter anything you feel necessary. I'll read it anyway. ^_^
I luff your story muchly. If this story is anything to judge by you're pretty awesome too. *adds story to SA list*
If you need anything message me. I'll assist you in any way I can.

of course I love you! I'd love you even more if you update this wonderful fic sooner! *wink*

luvs! sorry i didn't review on the other chapters, but i love all of them. keep it up! i don't see anything wrong with it. might just be that i can't write, but i do read alot and i still think its great! i love the names you made up. funny! XD

I love this fic! *flails* The characterization is great, and I love the situation in Sand. Awesome work with this. Please do write more soon!

~firedraygon97

ooh this is certainly getting interesting. i love naruto's genjutsu that was hilarious ^__^ update again soon!! i love gaanaru!!

I think this story is well written and has a brilliant developing plot. The charecters are well written, especially Naruto, and it has defintely caught my interest. Please continue.

*coughs* sorry for neglecting to read your bio. It's still a great story, though!

Well, I think your characterization is pretty accurate. And I like the plot line. A lot. ^-^ Sasuke might be a little OOC, but then, he doesn't normally run away from Orochimaru in a huff... it sounds like he's pretty desperate to get away, and I think that, being desperate, you write what he'd act like. Maybe you could shed some light on why he ran away soon? And maybe just a little blurby thing (even if just in an author's note) on why Akatsuki waited to pursue the jinchuuriki (even if it's really short, like "they needed more time to plan/get the weird totom pole thing in order" or something). I like it muchly! I hope you update soon, but it seems you might take a while... life gets in the way, but I hope you manage to shove it aside soon!