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ThisBurningHeart
2005-11-27 . chapter 4
So this is only Chapter 4, and I'm already really excited to see where this goes! This story is INCREDIBLE because it's so unique. Props to you, my friend!
hein
2005-10-10 . chapter 8
keep going i want to see where this leads it getting interesting
hein
2005-08-30 . chapter 7
it getting to the juicy parts keep going i'm happy that ur up dateing still it a good story
lil-miss-me119
2005-08-30 . chapter 7
this is a good story i really like it
ur a great writer! really good at being vague and giving hints that i still havent peaced together
one question but, will all the chapters start with a news article or will you like start to tell it more as a story? or do i have to wait to find out?
Alexandria J. Malfoy
2005-08-30 . chapter 7
oh a little twist in the tale!! but that would mean that shes Arven's daughter! OMG! well done, this is so cool. i love it!!
hein
2005-08-26 . chapter 6
i keep coming back and checking on this one it very good even if no one seem to read it it very good i like it alot so does my friends its getting interesting keep going with it your doing a good job on this story i can't wait for the next chap.
JennG
2005-08-08 . chapter 6
I am really enjoying the way you are writing this story. With each new chapter, I keep going back to the old ones, trying to see if I can make any more sense out of them. Keep them coming, I want to see if I'm remotely close to the right track!
hein
2005-07-25 . chapter 1
this is so good keep going with it. u write some new and fresh stuff ah im just loving it keep it up
Bob the Viking
2005-07-20 . chapter 4
Dear Rain Stormrider

Hello and greetings. Wow, 'The Beacon' is one awesome story.
I like the way you decided to use newspaper excerpts and headlines from the Daily prophet as vehicles for the ideas, plot, drama, and other important parts of the story. And not only was the headline/excerpt idea original, but as far as I could see on this site, it is uncommon, so thank you for doing that.
Of course, this story grabbed my interest from the first paragraph and it just kept pulling me in, just like Miss Rowlings' first Harry Potter book did, and I like it very much when stories do that for me.
I do have one suggestion to make, and that is to please make the story longer, because i feel that there is much more to the story than what i have read so far.
Speaking of things literary, I do like the way the story flowed from paragraph to paragraph, I liken it to a river flowing to sea unimpeded by dams and obstructions, and i do hope that you keep it that way.
Well, I do hope that you find the time to continue this story, I await further additions with much anticipation.

Sincerely

Bob the Viking
Helldarkangel1
2005-07-18 . chapter 4
yeh! u updated! ive been waiting a long long long time 4 u 2 update! if i hvnt commented...well...then please kindly forgive me! i really cant wait till u update ASAP! its totally aweseom!
Dear Me!
2005-07-17 . chapter 3
Sorry me again, i have a lot to say this time, i just finished reading and reviewing: part 4 of redemption, all of Aurora and now all ofthe Beacon. i've never seen Ginny in such a wonderfull light, a strong charecter, such tragedy, supernatural and al. biut to correct something in the first chapter! Harry maried Hermoine in both stories here you wrote Luna, though i love Luna very much "always like fics she is Ginny's best friend" :)

i love the way you write and how you are able to mix stuff together and make an excellent cuisine of it! "kisses fingers at you"

plz continue!

if i forgot anything hopefully i WILL send it to you again! just i would like to know, will she ever find true love? an OC of yours or some1 from myths and legends? and if you are into Angel & Buffy, plz don't match her up with spike! plz Angelous! "smirks"

again yor way of writing is wonderful plz keep the originality!

Love:
Me!
Intricate Elation
2005-06-30 . chapter 2
You're writing style is fabulous. Cold, clear-cut, really draws the reader in. Your ideas are fantastically original, and I really enjoy how you've portrayed Ginny in all of your stories so far. Very refreshing, very intriguing.
Alexandria J. Malfoy
2005-06-06 . chapter 2
ep! this looks so col! i cant wait for more, please post another chapter soon. good luck and well done for a wicked 2 chapters
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