Hey, your pretty good. It still needs more fluff though. This is a greatly interesting story that youv'e written. You must be the single most outstanding author on the internet!your on my favs!

That was awsome you should make it into a story.

NOW THAT WAS COOL!

aw! that was very well written! i think that...?...?...thinking... i don't think you should make it a story, but thats just me, if you have any good ideas for a story, go for it, but i like thius the way it is! well i twas very well written, and stuck to the point, and i liked it a lot! good job!

yes i definetly think you should make it into a story

aw, i think u should make it a story! well if u do update soon!

good job. is it alright if i use this as a letter to my future girlfriend? if so, it doesnt matter, I already used it. just kidding!

PhantomAL

wazzupy so great story i've been eyeing it but never read it then found it on a freinds fav. story page so ta-da

yes please make it a story!

aw! That was cute! It would be nice if you would continue, but I think it makes a good one-shot too, if you are busy with your other stories! Nice job though, unexpected!

YO that was good i say "WRIRE MORE MAN! YOU GOT SKILL!"

I say write more, but if you dont want to, dont, be free, and do what pleases your heart.

says MNM of PA

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