Beautifully done! The emotions,the thoughts were right on the money. It was like the ready had actually crawled into Max's head. Great Job!

Really nice, short and sweet.

Cool! Of course he got to her, he gets to everyone he meets, right? I love your writing! :)

very good. you really captured all the unsaid emotions that i see when i see max and logan together. two thumbs up!

Awesome! Keep up the good work!

Loved it more

That was good-those are exactly the kind of thoughts I would expect Max to have. I think she's never loved anyone before, so it's really hard for her to recognize the feeling when she has it. Thanks-I enjoyed that story.

wonderful! keep it up and write more!

very very good.

You did a great job feeding the song through out the story. The words added to the story rather then distracting from it. I liked it a lot.