That was beautiful. I especially loved the conversation between Lauren and Sark and the ending.

You're an exquisite writer; of the 'Alias' stories of yours that I have read so far, they are all brilliant. So moving, so touching, so painful. You certainly know how to envoke feeling within a person with words. You also manage to capture the essence of the characters, something that not all fan fiction writers can do. Keep up the excellent work.

That was so good!

*melts*

I always hated Lauren/Sark (after all, Lauren's the uber evil bitch lady, and Sarkney is a weakness of mine) until I saw 'A Man of His Word' - it hadn't really occured to me before then that L/S had been anything other than some playing around on the job. But now, I kind of like it, especially after reading this fic.

It's so powerful - Lauren feeling kind of lost, unloved, but trying to be so cool about it.. as well as wondering if she does feel something for Vaughn, or Sark, or anyone else.. ah, you've done a great job with her character.

Yay. i am so happy that i have finaly found something with Sark and Lauren. (even if there is only two now.) i love their relationship. it is so wickedly evil, yet Sark realy did love Lauren even if she just used him. it show you a diffrent side to Sark. any way, i liked it and thanks again for writng it.

great job very well written!

aww, pretty! (crap review!)

Hey i like it

as always of course...

Stark really loved her ...i saw the episode where he found out Michael shot her

but i'd think he'd want revenge

That was lovely! I've never seen the show, but this is a fluffy little fic. Hmm... not really fluffy... more like a lump of coal enveloped in cotton. You know? Sad and melancholy wrapped in kisses and roses. Great concept.

I loved the rain, almost as if it were a metaphor for her tears. Great job!

Loved it!

Huffah and mad props to you,

Ta

*Austin

That was lovely! I've never seen the show, but this is a fluffy little fic. Hmm... not really fluffy... more like a lump of coal enveloped in cotton. You know? Sad and melancholy wrapped in kisses and roses. Great concept.

I loved the rain, almost as if it were a metaphor for her tears. Great job!

Loved it!

Huffah and mad props to you,

Ta

*Austin