Goodgood!

Hey, this is good. It's a really interesting idea. I like how you made all the characters fit into the same poem form-thingie.

neat, but they all seem to be rand's point of view. anyway, i think the wheel of time books are the second greatest books ever written, the first is J. R. R. Tolkein's the lord of the rings trilogy, including the hobbit, any way, nice ones.

why poems are awesome. keep up the good work!

I like the repetition in this too. But I think it would be better if you had Rand's poem come last. Since he *is* the protagonist (even though Mat is quite awesome, of course *g*), and the Dragon and all that, it'd give it something to build up to. Very nice characterization of the ta'veren dudes in this poem, good job! :)

Oh! Cool!

Great job! I liked the repetition of pattern in the three poems. Since when did Mat become introspective? ;)

Great poems.

Oooh...I liked them! The way the form was similar for all three, but each meant something different, was cool.

Although i don't usually read poems, it was kinda nice.

I am really hoping that the Ta'veren in the books will get their damn smarts up (Rand can't kill a woman, come on, grow up...).