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| Inga 2006-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo sweet! The characters feel so true. |
| Kittenmommy 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abuseOh gosh, what a great little ficlet! |
| DianeB 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great little story. I especially liked George's reflection on the way his daughter smelled. The sense of smell is a potent memory trigger, so for George to compare the way Emily smells now to the mechanical smell of the slave ship is bang-on perfect for his character. Nice job. Well done. |