Wow. Very deep, as others have said. I myself am a Hakkai fan, and read more of the manga than the anime, but still... good job.
Heh. A certain green-eyed demon, eh? -twitches-

These little htings are nifty. You read 'em, they don't make sense. You read 'em again, they make sense. You read em one more time, and all of a sudden you're like... wow, that's deep. Awesome
_melissa

oh... nice...

i am glad you are still adding to this...- zan

ohh..
prose...

yay! sanzo gets in on the act now too! who can resist the kappa eh!

hey there, ilove all your 58/85 drabbles. i love how you see their relationship. and yes i am a hakkai fan, but through writings like yours i have come to love the kappa just as much and you are right. when gojyo's says things. it just like he is stating the facts, simply and homestly, but hakkai just can't seem to know how to take them. so i love all your metaphors and and undercurrents. i guess i'm reviewing all your other pieces too, not just this one... just so you know they are superbly appreciated. oh! was that too long for a review. sigh. i hope you don't mind.

wonderfully descriptive for a fic so short. the way its written feels more like poetry, i like that ^__^ i also like the little one-liner, made me smile :)