Reviews for The Seibu Project

Reviews For: The Seibu Project - Reviews: Page 1 of 7

justine 2007-12-16 ch 8, anon.	abuseYOU ARE THE MOST AMAZING WRITER EVER! exellent job magnificent etc...well you are amazing writer i had goose bumps in the beggining i could actually see in my head what happened i was really exited and scared at the same time sinc i was alone in my house reading it pls pls make more your amazing THANK YOU!
Chiisai Mu 2007-07-26 ch 8,	abuseVery interesting. i thought it was imaginative. Although, i saw the suspense, the horror part wasn't too evident to me. i, although this might just be me, saw more humor and horror. It doesn't take away from the fic, really, but i felt obligated to comment on that. Something else i noticed, although i'd never blame you for the honest mistake seeing as how it's a common myth, Daddy Long Legs are not really all that poisonous, and they CAN bite humans. Like i said, it's "common knowledge," albeit misinformed. i saw a few typos too, but nothing that would bother most people. Now, before you start thinking i ONLY focus on negative things... ^_^; Taking an idea like this and turning it into a fic is something, i'm certain, most people wouldn't have the presence of mind to think to do. How unique! Perhaps it's just me, but it seems as if people can take adaptations of movies or of other anime, but a real conspiracy (true or otherwise) is often viewed as taboo. Cookies for you for breaking the mold. You were very eloquent, and i feel like you got across the point and some of the emotion more than you gave yourself credit for. Overall, a spledid job. Congrats.
Umenoukoji Yuuhiru 2006-12-03 ch 8,	abuseWow... You rock! I love this story! This is my first suspense/horror story on and I'm really eager to read more- and more of these kinds from you. Hahaha... HieixYusuke fan for life! Mwuahaha...
IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2006-06-15 ch 8,	abuseawesome story!
healingwater 2005-12-29 ch 8,	abuseYay! This story took a while to get used to, but it was awesome! Am I correct in assuming that Yusuke decided on Hiei? Or is that just up to the reader...Anyways, I liked this story! You're writing is fantastic, so keep up the good work!
Duzen Broken DreamZ 2005-12-27 ch 8,	abusegood fic!
Nyte Kit 2005-12-26 ch 8,	abusevery nice job on this ending chapter. this was wonderful! i love how you had them still telling the story all the way until the end. the way you changed the format again right when Koenma came in was great. also, the way you told the truth of the Seibu Project was superb. it was almost as good as how you explained their plan of escape. i say almost because you did a wonderful job on that. you managed to explain everything that happened without merely telling the reader what was going on, if you get what i mean. it was just excellently written. i enjoyed the way you ended it, too, with Hiei still not telling Yusuke what he had wanted to. that was a great ending for this story with how it had progressed and all. great job!! i really enjoyed it! now i'm just waiting for your other fics. considering how many you have, this may take awhile. lol!
kurama-sweethart 2005-12-26 ch 8,	abuseNice ending! Definately not what I expected. I'm really sad to see it go, but Psychosis seems to be indulging my dark-fic obsession as of now. If I had something more constructive to say, I would, but it was really the type of ending that you get too caught up in to really notice any flaws in any aspect. ^_^
Kitsune-001 2005-12-26 ch 8,	abuseYay! A good end to a good story! Great job.
Inikus 2005-12-22 ch 7,	abusegreat atmospheric moment with Kuwabara and Yuusuke nearly being killed. Systematic, cold, it really came through with the way Kuwabara simply said, 'They're gonna kill us'. Thought Kurama's anger could have been more dramatic, and less detatached (On the behalf of Yuusuke's narration.) Maybe he could describe how he was acting physically, instead of just stating that he got mad. Though that's just being picky. Like being just inside Yuusuke's head. Seeing things as he does, very good balance between his immaturity and ability to find humour in the grimmist of situations, and his knowledge that if he doesn't act a certain way he's going to get killed. I wondered at first why you spent so much time in describing the few human deaths that the gang caused, but then realised that it was more realistic that way. I seem to have been desensitised to death in fiction as it happens so often. Excellent touch! I love your portrayal of Koenma- he really doesn't have any idea of the realities of the human world and of pain as he has never faced mortality. Despite the fact that you didn't enjoy the 6th chapter, it has worked really well. I'm not going to attempt to answer your questions in the auther's notes bit, cos I'll probably just embarass myself. Is Koenma a badey? I'm suspecting everyone now, you've just made me so paranoid! nervous shifty eyes It's just so nice to see a story being done so prefessionally. It's obvious that a lot of planning went into this. Long review to make up for the lack of reviews in other chapters (I read all through the story after reading you mentioning about it in another story, and just couldn't stop to review after each chapter, soz) I skipped the simpsons to read this, you know what kind of sacrifice that is!?! Going on my favourite stories list! p.s. sorry I use English (UK) spellings for words, so they might look wrong to you - I'm not stupid, I promise!
Kitsune-001 2005-11-09 ch 7,	abuseI really like this. It it so well developed and in character. I think that I have the parings figured out. I really hope that you keep on going with this. I really like it. I read it when I was home alone and when my dad rang the doorbell I jumped. I did the same thing when my dog barked. I really like your style. Keep up the great work.
Koshi Sekisen 2005-11-06 ch 7,	abuseWow! Amazing... so bad I didn't read this FF sooner! It's really great, I mean, it's not usual to find some story like this, so creative and about militaries, so it's really impressive! Ok... I always wondered how did Yusuke manage to attract so many people! xDD Please continue!
Wolf-black-flame 2005-10-18 ch 7,	abuseThe story's almost over? DAMN! I just started reading it! Anyways, update soon, I love your writing!
Nyte Kit 2005-10-08 ch 7,	abuseah! i had almost forgotten about this story. gratitude goes to you for updating it. i thought this chapter was pretty good. there weren't as many reflections and musings as the other chapters, but it was still a nice read. i liked the little change of POV to Kurama's that you added for a bit, as well. and now, i am wondering just what is going on. i'm sure Koenma would want to see them immediately to make sure they're all okay, so what's going on this time? interesting... update soon!
kit-kit 2005-10-08 ch 7, anon.	abusenice

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