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| DianeB 2007-01-28 ch 5,  | abuseAt this point in your story, I'm going to suggest an alternative for Serena that (once again) they would *never* have considered when BW was airing: termination. She should at least THINK about this option. Doesn't matter if she decides against it, but she should at least think about it. Certainly she has magical connections that could provide her a safe procedure. But Serena needs to do some real soul-searching about this. It's time she got over ** about the fact that she's pregnant and starting making some real plans, whether it's abortion or allowing Sam to adopt it or, in fact, deciding to keep it herself. |
| kawaii-peach14 2006-07-01 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter! Update soon! |
| Sam_the_Good_Witch 2006-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseHi! I like your story. Hope you update soon! |
| x.Irish.o.Eyes.x 2006-06-18 ch 4, | abuseBrilliant story idea! I really enjoyed it so far! Hmm, Serena having to settle down. That really IS a dilemma! :D |
| The Written One 2005-08-02 ch 4, | abuseHey... great story! I wrote a sort of sequel... "The Long Lost Witch"--hope you don't mind! :) |
| kawaii-peach14 2005-07-05 ch 4, | abuseOh, she was really ticked off about being pregnant, wasn't she? Please update, I wanna see what happens! |
| chetspet 2005-05-12 ch 3, | abuseThis is a great story-I hope you write more toit soon. Who is the dad and will Serena keep it? Please keep going with this. |
| omystars 2005-04-23 ch 3, anon. | abusethis is really good. great idea too:) |
| DianeB 2005-04-19 ch 2, | abuseHey, keep moving on this story. This is a *great* plot device, and one TPTB on Bewitched back in the day would NEVER have touched. But it's certainly not outside the realm of possibility that Serena would end up preggers, especially during her "free love/hippie-dippie 'Iffin'" phase. You could easily turn this small beginning into an epic piece of fanfiction. |
| kawaii-peach14 2005-04-16 ch 2, | abuseI won't be surprised if she is pregnant...Serena gave the impression throughout the Bewitched series that she is the kind of person to err...do something like that. Obivously they would never put this kind of thing on the real show, but it's cool to put your own twists on it. I do that all the time. Can't wait to get more from you! Peach_fan14 |
| Barry I. Grauman 2005-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abuse"How do you know if you're pregnant?". Oh, boy... I hate to think what will happen next! Intriguing beginning...'DouMarNutBle', I think you have a winner! |