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Reviews for: Beginning of the end or end of the beginning
JohnnyG
2005-06-20 . chapter 2
This story is quite interesting so far. Keep up the good work.

Best,
~JohnnyG
ariel stormcloud
2005-06-19 . chapter 2
great story. there seems to be a bit missing. "Bind?" seems to come out of no-where. you were discussing the weapon then switched to 'part-way' through a discussion between naruto and kyuubi.
pong
2005-03-26 . chapter 1
id like to see more of this
Teal Thanatos
2005-03-24 . chapter 1
good, very good.
Plots good too XD
ariel stormcloud
2005-03-23 . chapter 1
interesting
ziptrip
2005-03-23 . chapter 1
This story has come to a very interesting start. I'm very intrigued as to where you are going to take this.
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