Lol Awsome! XD Auron makes an awsome crazy pirate! :D

nice monty python reference in there.

loved the monkey line. "hey, if that's his kink."

Ok so random! I'm not sure what the hell was going on through most of that hehe it was so funny loved the line 'She had breasts too' i don't know why, it was just really amusing! I really liked this, it was good!

Ha! Ha! Ha! You so totally rock! that is funny! i like it when yuna called tidus a **! Rikku is a monkey and auron is a retard! this story is so funny. i wish you would add another chapter magically.

Lol very funny please write more!
Bob:“That’s Captain Yuna, **!”that is funny
George: no its rude
ignore george he has no sense of humor
George: do to!
Bob:Do not!
George:do to!
Roboto:beep!
anyways while they fight...loved the story keep updating...oh no roboto dont take out your flame thrower of death! NO BOB DONT SMACK GEORGE RUN GEORGE RUN!
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Ah, this was amazingly awesome! I couldn't stop laughing throughout! Auron a pirate? And Rikku his monkey? Haha, the disembodied talking breasts things was really amusing too! This was really great :D

Weeiirrd...but funny! More please...

Ah, you can't end it there! >_< It was so good! xDD Lol, Rikku the pet monkey. Hehe.. very original story line. You should definately add more chapters.

scary...

Whee! Happyfun! I like this. :D Especially Yuna with a riding crop and Rikku as the ship's monkey. Heh. I say keep this one up!

-Rae/ the AntiPixie

Wow. This was... peculiar. But very very good. I'd wuv it if you wrote more, though I [may] forgive you if you don't.
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Kidding. After writing something like that, you could be forgiven for origional sin (why anyone would want to be forgiven for that I don't know.)

See you around.

Hehehehe... Can totally see this. Rikku is a monkey? And Sin does look like a whale- a beached one at that. Are you going to do more?

Possibly one of the more bizarre stories I've read! I simply adored the monkey part. Brilliant. :-)

...xD This was odd. Definitly unique! I loved it! I'm hoping you get some good reviews and make a Part 2! ^_^

I do apologize but I cannot read dialect with any comfort and so was unable to finish this. I am sure you did your usual professional job on the characters and dialogue, but ...