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CastaS 9/13/06 . chapter 4
great story, a sequel would be nice
Janna Silver Hawkins 1/17/06 . chapter 3
nice job!

and I think you should write a sequel to it :D
Visigoth29527 5/15/05 . chapter 4
Hey... liked the story a lot. And I agree, the first version of the ending is better IMHO. If you're up to it, I would enjoy seeing your take on Drakken and Shego in a follow up story... so count this as a Yea vote. Nice work!
BOC42 5/14/05 . chapter 4
I prefer the first ending as well, just so you know. It's a really cute idea, this, and doing Dr. D and Shego would be cute. I never really liked the idea of D and S doing anything besides some blundering flirting, but to each his own. I liked the part where Ron suddenly realized Kim was right behind him. Nice job.
christina 5/14/05 . chapter 3
pleasse write a sequal reaaly great fic!
pixie2010 5/14/05 . chapter 3
Good job. I liked the story, especially the bit about Drakken and Shego at the end. Very heartfelt and pure. Keep writng fics!
Jamie-McFly 5/14/05 . chapter 3
Very cute! The watcher... You should have him hook up some other people.
Story Helper 5/14/05 . chapter 3
Short and sweet. I liked it. Of course, you need to check your quotation marks for the speech. But all in all, it's pretty good.
RngrThorne 5/14/05 . chapter 3
You need to check for some missing words, and you slipped into 3rd person at least once in the first two chapters. Great story, though, and I'd love to read the sequal.
Silver Sparklze 5/14/05 . chapter 3
Not bad. Kind of blasphemous and sacriligous, but not bad all the same.
Rina j 5/13/05 . chapter 3
Ya you should write a sequel it was a great story.
Classic Cowboy 5/13/05 . chapter 3
very nicely done, and a follow up would be nice. two thumbs up!
Never See Me Coming 4/26/05 . chapter 2
Man I can't believe you! Of course you should post that last chapter! Don't leave ur fanfictioners on a cliffhanger! Great story so far though. ;-D
slpytlak 4/17/05 . chapter 2
Please, let nothing bad is going to happen.
BOC42 4/12/05 . chapter 2
I'm hooked. I'd really like a next few chapters
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