 CastaS 9/13/06 . chapter 4great story, a sequel would be nice |
 Janna Silver Hawkins 1/17/06 . chapter 3nice job!
and I think you should write a sequel to it :D |
 Visigoth29527 5/15/05 . chapter 4Hey... liked the story a lot. And I agree, the first version of the ending is better IMHO. If you're up to it, I would enjoy seeing your take on Drakken and Shego in a follow up story... so count this as a Yea vote. Nice work! |
 BOC42 5/14/05 . chapter 4 I prefer the first ending as well, just so you know. It's a really cute idea, this, and doing Dr. D and Shego would be cute. I never really liked the idea of D and S doing anything besides some blundering flirting, but to each his own. I liked the part where Ron suddenly realized Kim was right behind him. Nice job. |
 christina 5/14/05 . chapter 3 pleasse write a sequal reaaly great fic! |
 pixie2010 5/14/05 . chapter 3Good job. I liked the story, especially the bit about Drakken and Shego at the end. Very heartfelt and pure. Keep writng fics! |
 Jamie-McFly 5/14/05 . chapter 3Very cute! The watcher... You should have him hook up some other people. |
 Story Helper 5/14/05 . chapter 3 Short and sweet. I liked it. Of course, you need to check your quotation marks for the speech. But all in all, it's pretty good. |
 RngrThorne 5/14/05 . chapter 3You need to check for some missing words, and you slipped into 3rd person at least once in the first two chapters. Great story, though, and I'd love to read the sequal. |
 Silver Sparklze 5/14/05 . chapter 3Not bad. Kind of blasphemous and sacriligous, but not bad all the same. |
 Rina j 5/13/05 . chapter 3Ya you should write a sequel it was a great story. |
 Classic Cowboy 5/13/05 . chapter 3very nicely done, and a follow up would be nice. two thumbs up! |
 Never See Me Coming 4/26/05 . chapter 2Man I can't believe you! Of course you should post that last chapter! Don't leave ur fanfictioners on a cliffhanger! Great story so far though. ;-D |
 slpytlak 4/17/05 . chapter 2Please, let nothing bad is going to happen. |
 BOC42 4/12/05 . chapter 2I'm hooked. I'd really like a next few chapters |