 Evil Genius Girl 2005-10-04 . chapter 8"So what was in the fridge today, Grissom? Blood? Fungus?"
Possibly the best line in the whole story.
Evil Genius Girl |
 Carlanime 2005-05-24 . chapter 9Personally I lean towards making it M-rated (not that I won't still enjoy it if you keep things light, because I will, but I'd enjoy seeing things develop). |
 DispatchIsBomb 2005-05-20 . chapter 9Great! you have momentarily almost convinced me that GSR might be a good thing. we'll have to see what they do on el TV. anyway, i really like it. Good stuff!
Cat |
 Niebezpiczny Ksiezyc 2005-04-27 . chapter 9I'm not really sure if I want the rating to change because either way I will still enjoy reading this fic! Really great chapters!! Thanks for posting it!! Keep writing! |
 TC 2005-04-27 . chapter 9 Just came across the story and please do continue. Changing the rating sounds like a good idea to me. The chapters are a wee bit short but i like the content though. What did actually lead Griss to open himself to Sara though? |
 ann73 2005-04-26 . chapter 9 keep going please and change the rating
great work! |
 Inara Cabot 2005-04-26 . chapter 9GO ALL OUT CHANGE IT TO M!
are you still looking for a beta reader!
i have lots of time on my hands and would be happy to do it!
crystalgirl1991@
inara |
 Arrendi 2005-04-26 . chapter 9M! for for... ok so I can't come up with anything that starts with M and means continue, but hey I tried! |
 Meganp 2005-04-26 . chapter 9lololol It was just a naughty comment! Is just that UST is good, but just 'till a certain point. He loves her and she loves him, so I can't help but ask: guys, what are you two waiting for! Go with it already lol. Seriously, you keep doin' watcha doin'and you'll be fine, this story is great as it is. Hugz. Meg |
 CSIFan4Life 2005-04-26 . chapter 9Like I said before, I definitely think that you should write more. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
~Jackie~ |
 Meganp 2005-04-25 . chapter 8My god, you're doing a hell of a job! Really, can't wait to see what the next chapter will bring! This is going in a great direction (I'm a sucker for a good GSR Fluff). Just keep doing whatcha doing and this story will continue to be great, believe me!
Now, I feel like making a naugthy comment: I read some of the reviews and noticed that Arrendi asked "Does Sara get the egg salad sandwich out of her blouse?" I started laughing and thinking about how Gil could help her get rid of that. lol I know, bad bad girl ;)
Meg |
 Tabbiez 2005-04-24 . chapter 8Aw. It's so cute. ^^ You have a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but it's awesome. I love it. |
 Arrendi 2005-04-23 . chapter 8NO NO YOU CAN'T END IT NOW! Well unless your going to do a sequal or another story very shortly. So many questions are left unanswered... Does this progress? Does this relationship interfere with work? Do the others notice it? Does it go so far that they get married? and most importantly (being funny of course) Does Sara get the egg salad sandwich out of her blouse? And egads make Grissom shave PLEASE! I have issues with the beard...I think you could write just an absolutly MAGNIFICENT wedding. but no you most deffinatly can not end here unless there is a sequal or another story in the wings waiting to be published that would be cruel and unusual punishment to dedicated readers such as myself. |
 seeareuh 2005-04-22 . chapter 8lovin da fluff.beta-ing is liek correcting, right? I can do that if you want. vegasgrl91@ |
 CSIFan4Life 2005-04-22 . chapter 7Hey I know I just reviewed chapters 7 and 8 together but I clicked the submit button before I meant to. Anyway, I wanted to thank you for reviewing my fic and to let you know that chapter 7 for it is now up.
~Jackie~ |