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pride1289
2009-08-15 . chapter 7
oro?
You've left off on one confusing chapter. And it's been 4 yrs since you've updated! WHat a travesty.
pride1289
2009-07-14 . chapter 4
The only thing wrong with someone living through the massacre besides Bakura is that there were 100 ppl in Kul Elna and 99 were needed. But w/e. I'ma gunna see whatsa gunna happen afta this. ^_^
Psycho BakuRyo
2005-06-20 . chapter 6
Wow...this is new the
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Maybe it's not I haven't been on to this site in ages. My space is like...a drug. I need to get off it. Well anyway, to story matters! Yes, I read it again like a poem and outloud ONLY! I had the radio really loud so it sounded like I was singing in monotone. Pretty smart huh? ((smiles)) It was really good. I have no freaking clue who maah-blah blah is. lol. I see this takes in the egypt thingy so I'm stumped with characters but characters in all stories are just...dumb they're just there for pretty. Like Bakura. Lol. hehehe. Yea and the next one...I'm not waiting another week. But still tell me when you post it since i never come on this site anyway. I'm leaning how to draw without looking at stuff. I'm teaching myself. My god it's pretty simple. It of course doesn't come out as good as if I look at something but...it happens to everyone. ((wow my first time putting the little guy)) Reading this made me wanna write my next chapter when Ryou d...OH! I made a song. Lol. It's called foxy. Did I tell you it? It goes like.
There was a fox who had a fox and foxy was his name-o! F-o-x-y x2 and foxy was his name-O! lol. I'm screwing up your review lol.

((Serious now)) lol. Very good chapter um...very very good. El capitulo era EXCELLENTE! Putting my italian studying to good use...Il capitolo era molto buono All them say it was a very good chapter lol. I love being so complicated. I leave you really long reviews lol. Feel special hehehe
Marjoram
2005-06-19 . chapter 6
Yes, I am totally awesome XD

I love the dialouge (I believe I spelled that wrong) before the real chapter. 'tis so funny!

Ugh, I have to go brush my teeth, braces suck :(
albino-yaoi
2005-06-19 . chapter 6
Nyeah! This is so cool! It's hard to find fics like this in Baku's POV, too O.o; pwease continue! ^.^
Psycho BakuRyou
2005-06-13 . chapter 5
Lol I remember reading this story out like a poem. I was saying it with like so much feeling yea...my family came in...thinking I was weird. They were interrupting my story time. It wasn't a good story...It was a GREAT...chapter there we go. lol Since you're updating faster I better see another posted on...Wednesday you got that? That peanut butter sandwich was awesome by the way. hehehe...you better update or I will...gr not to talk to you! lol!
Marjoram
2005-06-13 . chapter 5
Yay you updated! Wahoo!

Love the story so far, it's so...awesome XD
crimson gates of paradise
2005-05-05 . chapter 1
Bleep, bleep. This is a test.

If you're reading this fic because of the number next to the review remark, this
test was successful. People do read this things quicker when they already have
reviews ^-^ (and if you're about to flame us because you're burning up of anger
and feel deceived... this test has succeeded too ;) (if you don't get why, ask
yourself WHY you're mad... Maybe because we're right? ^-^ )) No, lol... Hope you
liked the fic, though. (this is not meant to ** people off, just to find
something out ^-^)
Marjoram
2005-04-19 . chapter 4
Hehe, blood...

Anyway here are my two guesses for the point of view for the next chapter:

High Priest Seto
The Pharaoh

These are probably the most obvious choices, but my brain shutted (I don't think that's a word) down.
Marjoram
2005-04-10 . chapter 3
Yay! You updated!
AranyaFeliz
2005-04-09 . chapter 1
O.O *recommends*
Queen Galux
2005-03-31 . chapter 2
'tis fascinating. bakura being evil, sadistic and all of us readers hearing everything he's thinking. ^_^ me likey bakura being evil and sadistic! *licks lips* m. yummy.

write more! pwease?

queen-galux
Marjoram
2005-03-23 . chapter 1
I like it, now I want to know who died. I believe I know who died, but I'm probably wrong. Update!!
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