Great story. Took your advice and joined the Yahoo group. I hope you don't stop writing. I have read everything you have written on patlabor and Ranma. If you haven't read his stories, you don't know what you're missing.

In a nutshell: outstanding! I have known your fanfics since this summer and I really hoped that you were planning to go on writing...

I wish I had some writing talent like you or Nagumo... I am looking forward to read your next story!

(sorry for my poor english, I am french)

I realized something... I have never even wrote a single review for your fanfics yet...

So here's your first Desaix.

Great job and eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

Wonderful! This is a great fic, it's just like discovering another Patlabor series. I especially liked the softball game, and the mechanics' revenge on Asuma. Please keep it up, I'd love to see more of this. Thanks!

please hurry and wright more i realy like your stories.

More! I have enjoyed reading your fics. I hope that you continue to write.

Please Finish this! :)

cool story please countinue

finally, a patlabor fic! and a saga too! ahd it promises over 70 parts! im so glad i found this and that you wrote it, not only is it a patlabor fic (which i cant find anywhere) but a kick ass one to boot! you got the characters down and everything. my god is good. i cant wait for more!

I love your Patlabor fics. I am very happy that this one is divided by chapters and is easy to read. I hope you continue both of your Patlabor fics.

Yeah! Finally a new chapter. _ Expected more with Sakaki's retirement, but insanity can't always pop up for SV2.