nice

Wow this is a gret fic. I think Jack/Z would be a good couple.

your really good keep up the good work and y dont u like connor?

Wow, Jack and Z really have excellent control to sleep so close and not do anything. Nice. You should watch your grammar (you mixed past and present tenses). Otherwise, this is a sweet story.

loved it!

good job. write another story soon

Not bad for a first pr fic! I love it! keep writeing!

ME! I'm such a big Bridge/Syd shipper! There's hardly any out there!

Though there are Sky/Syd "hints", they're also Bridge/Syd hints like when Syd called Bridge, "Bridgey" in Beginnings Pt.1 and 2 and when they were playing that magnetic stick game in Messenger Pt. 1.

I like Sky/Syd but I really think Bridge/Syd would work out better. That's why my SPD stories have B/S shippings though there is a love triangle. Bridge/Syd/Sky.

I like Jack/Z and I'm a shipper to that. Write more!

loved it

I must say I do not like SPD but I do like Z and Jack and this story was really good. Great job.

TheDarkOne

I liked this fic.

it's only your opinion that Sky/Syd aren't a reasonable couple

Wow! This was a sweet fic! I already liked the idea of an Jack/Z relationship, and this story just increases my desire to see more!

Yeah, Bridge/Syd is better than Sky/Syd. But Jack/Z rocks! Loved this cute ficlet! It really digs deep into their relationship.

If you promise to do more Jack/Z fics, I'll put you on author alert, LOL!

dude, thatw as incredible. you have to keep going with the Jack/Z fanfics. I've searched everywhere for them, and I've only found two! With yours bein one of them. And the other is on I have a few ideas that you could use if you want. I keep trying to write them out but it doesn't come out like I want. I guess I'm not the writer, just the thought behind it. so let me know if you're interested. My e-mail adress is dwildfire