Good work on this story so far, I'm looking forward to reading more soon.

Although sometimes in this story you use the word "for" where it is not needed.

So far I am enjoying the plot of the story but there are some very large problems with the presentation. People talk far too much and there are far too many recaps of information. It feels like you are trying to drill the information into the readers, harming how good the story could have been. Concepts are repeated ad infinitum, people talk far too much, subjects that should just be glanced over or at least broken up into slightly smaller chunks are crammed down our gullet in giant bolder sized chunks. Other than that I like the concept and the way the story is headed but the presentation is damned near painful to read.

As advice I would recommend slightly higher adherence to KISS and cut down on long winded explanations.

1. I got bored... too much dialog.

2. The character seem to share one-mind. I get the feeling everyone perfectly understands each other, and that they're just reading from their scripts.

3. The one dimensional characters of Genma and Akane was getting very annoying, not to mention repetitive. They never learn from their mistakes, and never develop any further, as if they're just broken recorders repeating themselves over and over.

4. The story seems too black and white. Obviously we can tell who you like and dislike. I find character bashing to be dull, and feel nothing from it. A good story needs emotions, and be able to make you feel them. Haven't you ever felt sad or hurt before? Mistrusted, betrayed, angered, ashamed? Write about those times you had, and this story will be way better.

tis story is by far the best i have read to date, i love the way it flows and i am waiting for the next chapters. you are a outstanding writer, very good job.

Fantastic story, I do hope your muse still likes this story enough to let you continue writing it ;)

when i you going to finish this its really good

Please update!! YOU ARE TAKING FOREVER!

I have enjoyed this story since I first read it, and would like to see whats next. Though Im sure we all know the answer,to see just how you put it will be enjoyable.

I finally managed to read all of the chapters. To be honest, I've never been that big of a fan of Ranma x Kasumi. Your story changed my opinion on them.

:) This is probably one of the best Ranma stories I've read. I hope to see an update in the near future!

Great freakin fanfic!!

I want to know what happens next! I bet no one expected Kasumi to pop the question. Update soon please!

-Ellias Gabriel

Not bad.

Wicked! Ranma proposed to while in girl form! I love it, now if you can get them married you can tag this thing completed. Then there will be the sequel you have been hinting at, the reason Ranma is training everyone so hard. Keep it up and thanks.

I absolutely loved this new chapter. You've come a long way when it comes to your writing style. Your other stories are really well written, and after rereading all the chapters of with one, I really realized how much your writing style has changed... for the better.

Nice seeing an update here. It's been a while.