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| teenage-romance-x0x 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseNice work. Budding young poet, write more. Good afternoon! |
| gare de lyon 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abusethat was an awesome poem to read, and very sad too, but mostly good |
| XxcookiemonsterxX 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseWow that was REALLY good! |
| happyhooligan2001 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseThis guy was an evil criminal who got what he deserved but I guess even evil people get lonely sometimes. |
| HerPaperHeart 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. It was such a great movie, and this poem is probably EVERYTHING he was thinking, you know? Wow... My heart soared when I read (on wikipedia)that she FINALLy went to visit him and told him she was sorry for not coming sooner. |
| Rinse and Repeat 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous and powerfully written. I think you did a great job writing George's feelings. +Athena |
| Sabrina-Starr 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI just wanted to say that I absolutely love your poem, it's so freaking awesome! Just one little thing about the movie(&life of george jung) I think the daughter is right. Her father was a ** criminal, he promised her so much, and gave her nothing. He's dissapointed her, big time. I can understand perfectly that she doesn't want to see him again. But yet i also understand your point of view.. xx, keep up the ** amazing writing! |
| Mrs Lovett 88 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abusethat was so powerful, so beautiful! amazing. |
| crzywhtgrl 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abusewow me and my friend both say thats amazing he got me into the movie big |
| LongshotMike 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI'm sorry but I think you're on crack. This guy was a drug dealer. Who cares if he loved his own child? He caused a whole generation of other people's children to become addicted to cocain! Are you out of your mind? |
| haydenlover19 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseFINALLY...iv been waiting for someone to start this catagory...nobody can call themselves a true johnny depp fan unless they have seen this movie...its one of the greats!! lol, anyways i loved the poem, really good stuff. |
| tearsxofxhate 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuseAW...that was so sad...you are a god writer... :( ...lol Xx-Courtney-xX |
| Keeper Of Untold Legends 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. I actually love it. Um... hm... don't know what else to say though, besides that you're right. She should be glad that her dad even cares about her. I mean my dad could care less about me. God damn him. Sorry... it's just that I'm not sure rather to love or hate him. Anyway nice poem. Sorry for the little out burst. *blush* |
| Jacksfluzey 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseomg that was written so well! i loved it! truly amazing! |
| virginDreams 2005-08-01 ch 1, | abuseI know what you mean, I felt the same way after watching that movie and how horrible it was that she never visited her father. But getting wrapped up in the Johnny Deppness of the movie, my mom reminded me that the guy did alot of horrible things and is just getting what he deserves, but I do believe in forgivness, even in these kind of extreme cases, but I would bet 10 to 1 she went to go see him after this movie came out. But great poem :) |