First off were the perfect weapons the pistols or him. Cause only a slight reference was made about the pistols, yet his stare and not the guns scared the guys. Second to much description. Sounds more like an ad then a story. Ever action, thought, or movement doesn't need a full on description. Finally to may flash backs to moments or situations that have no barring on the story. Other than that it was ok.

Expanding your repertoire, that's good, I like that. If I'd beta'd this (ahem!) I's have broken up the text a little more, but that's a minor thing. Good stuff.