Odd quote.

update soon

i just read all 22 chapters so far and its great. please update soon.

i really like it so far... anyone who flames u is a jerk, i might have been able to give you some constructive critisisim but i've been awake for about 29 hours and counting... anyway, interesting story, it drove me nuts waqiting for the wish and it will prolly drive me even more nuts waiting for you to explain the being a god part... anyway keep going.

Interesting. There are very few stories out there that catch my attention all the way to the current chapter posted. The length isn't all that bad either. The story itself is very good. You've obviously thought this through very carefully, either that or you're just a very good writer. Keep up the good work and please update soon.

Shadow Kage

nice

I just read all 22 chapters of your story AMONG THE CHOSEN. The story idea is great but the way you are writing it lacks focus. Do you even have an outline or are you just randomly wandering along? Every good story has three parts; a beginning middle and end. The subplot of Ranma becomeing a were-cat of some sort does not obviously contribute to how he became a god/demon. Why has Ranma contacted Akane? Does he want to get back together with her? Congratulate her on her engagement to Ototoi? Make an outline, post it in the next chapter. Readers will still want to know the details so you are not giving the story away.

Very Addicting. A few spelling errors here and there, but then again I have them ALL the time XD
It's a good route you've taken Ranma in, and giving us a lot to think about; we all know he has soo much potential, and were still waiting on how he became a god ^_^; Keep up the great work! ^_^ b

I would have to classify this story as a bit… odd. You have a good plot and storyline but one of the major flaws in the story is that you jump around too much, leaving other conflicts unresolved or unsatisfied.

By putting this all in flashback format and with Ranma being Urd’s sister, you leave the readers wondering just how that happened but when you still haven’t gotten to that explanation within 21 chapters, you leave a majority of you readers unsatisfied and/or fed up.

Finally, I think that the were-panther thing could have been done a whole lot better. Or at least you could have thought up a better excuse. Personally I think that the story would be better without it but that’s your choice. Ranma ending up as Urd’s sister by some reason or another would have been a perfect story starter and finisher without having all the other plot twists that you insist on putting in.

Until then I hope that you will be able to redo the story into a somewhat more organized state. Cheers.

P.S. I like your random quote section

good god goodd

At least I can AFFORD to buy my clothes at the toilet store.

'As I said before I will change part of the story to fill plot hole WHEN THEY ARE POINTED OUT.' - you

don't bother, plot holes are fun! they keep us on our toes incite flamy goodness.

Hmm just as I thought. I'm curious to see if Ranma and Ranko will actually combine into one being with full control over both the curse and the were-panther transformation. Now that would be cool.

And boy could he/she scare Genma then; imagine a were-panther Ranma with full control over the curse and the Neko-ken. Fun! Good chapter, update when you can.

Well, if you want to write a good story, you will really have to improve your grammar. Part of telling a good story is having an interesting imagination. The other part of telling a good story is being able to express it properly. The better your grammar becomes the better your story will read. For instance, switching to past tense will improve things a great deal. There are however other grammar issues you have like punctuation and well other things one notices when reading :) , but alas I'm to tried to go back and look...

Boy, that's not good you go from having the story told in past tense in chapter 1 to present tense. I don't think that many people are good at writing a story in that tense, so I suggest you go back to past tense which I find superior anyaway. Actually, you use some past tense in this chapter as well so the thing is incorrectly done. I hope chapter 3 is an improvement.