 0p1vy 2009-11-02 . chapter 2This is one of the ones I always come back to. I love how you write these two, I love the little peeks into John's past.
"That hour the son of a ** actually had Zelenka followed me around and talk about him. Nonstop."
And Zelenka. Oh, Zelenka. Hee.
It just really can't get any better than this. Smart, funny, touching, everyone is...not just in-character, but more-so. It's that little extra dimension that fanfic ideally adds to the picture...and what you add is just wonderful.
And of course, a bleeding John Sheppard doesn't hurt. ^^
I will probably keep coming back to reread in the future. Thank you for your contribution to the fandom...it really is something special. Cheers. |
 Kadigan 2008-12-20 . chapter 2The John Sheppard / Rodney McKay solution to psychological trauma is pretty priceless. XD |
 Kateri1 2008-11-14 . chapter 2Oh that was a fantastic story. One of the best friendship pieces I've read in a while |
 Thraesja 2008-11-14 . chapter 2Came via a stargateficrec review on livejournal. So worth it.
This was a great look into Sheppard's mind and viewpoint on Rodney and everyone he's lost in the past. Great blends of angst and humour are difficult to achieve. Loved your Zelenka. You hit Carson bang on. And then there's Rodney of the constant hair cracks. Absolutely loved the image of him blowing up some bully's car in high school.
Well done. |
 iamza 2008-11-14 . chapter 2 (Stumbled across this story by way of stargateficrec on LJ)
I enjoyed this look inside John's head, and at his mental closet of boxed ghosts.
I also really enjoyed the interaction between John and Rodney, and the light touches of humour that keep things from becoming too dark. For example, Zelenka speculating that as Rodney named his dog, Schroedinger, perhaps Rodney had named the cat, Pavlov. And where John confirms that killing Zelenka would be bad by stopping in to chat with Father Malloy. Those moments made me laugh out loud.
And, hee, Rodney was wearing John's T-shirt in the alien dream!Earth. Rodney *really* loves that shirt, doesn't he. |
 Syble 2008-11-13 . chapter 2 I followed a recomendation to this wonderful story. I love you Rodney/John banter - It's perfect. Now I must hurry off and read the rest! |
 ferryboat George 2008-07-01 . chapter 2Another outstanding story. I'm glad this series is going to stay gen, since I don't read slash :P You're interactions between Sheppard and McKay are outstanding.
< Now…Rodney’s first pet was dog. Schroedinger was name. I’m not sure if this irony to Rodney or simply stupidity. Then later he had cat. Maybe he name cat Pavlov to even things out, yes? >
ROFL!
and just because I forgot to post this in a previous LOC...
< And he knew telling McKay not to do something was the same as painting your ** red and mooning a bull. >
as delightful as that image is, Mythbusters did prove that bulls don't hate red any more than any other color. |
 CatW 2008-05-22 . chapter 2I've been reading your whole Geeks and Goons series today and gotta say I'm loving them, I really like your characterisation, but I had to review this story in particular because FINALLY someone pointed out how absolutely god-awful John's tracksuit ensemble from Home was!
"And so I hear was a tracksuit only a member of the Village People could have loved"
Abso-freakin-lutely priceless!! |
 SaJi 2008-05-19 . chapter 2Aww...John lost his shirt.
OMG. The first chapter death scenes make me melt into a puddle of goo. So sorry Rodney, I love you. Truly. They were...perfect. And Rodney doggely dogging Sheppard in the second chapter was great, especially with Zelenka helping out. =D And the fact that Rodney got clocked... keke |
 Miravisu 2008-01-04 . chapter 2>“Thank God. The Marquis de Sade has left the building. Now we can talk.”<
rofl!
>Now…Rodney’s first pet was dog. Schroedinger was name. I’m not sure if this irony to Rodney or simply stupidity. Then later he had cat. Maybe he name cat Pavlov to even things out, yes?”<
*bursts out laughing*
Oh goodness, these are the small details that I do adore in stories.
And that striptease commentary, priceless ;D
*wipes tears from eyes and applauds* |
 Silverthreads 2007-07-04 . chapter 2Wonderful tale |
 Splitbeak 2007-06-23 . chapter 2hehehehehehehahahahahaha! |
 Smudge the rat 2007-05-31 . chapter 2Hi, I'm reading the entire series, but I decided to take a break and review this one for two reasons.
Firstly. "pulled a Gall" - this just struck me as really sad, that people dying is so commonplace that John has a term for when people shoot themselves.
Secondly. "John Jacob Jingleheimerschmidt" - why is this ringing bells in my head? Damnit. I have no idea where that's from, but I know I've heard it! |
 heartfallen 2007-04-23 . chapter 2What an amazing story! I loved it! Excellent job |
 Princess Kitsune Hi 2006-01-27 . chapter 2lol I want my T-shirt back. Great fic, although McKay did die... T__T I'm beginning to like hime MORE and MORE now, and that scares me. O_o I am a Sheppard fan! ><
But also being a McKay fan is good. ^//^ |