The title and topic caught my eye.. and it left me want a peice of Tiramisu.

If all addictions were quite so tam...and delicious.

more please!!

now that's a good story, very nice work. I love the way that you just draw the reader into Olivia's mind, and the way you manage to keep us there. There have been many train-wreak-of-a-stories out there from 1st person views, but yours isn't one of them.

what does f/f stand for in pairing?

I am not going to review your story and I am going to make a complete **/jerk out of myself.

Where do you get off. You are picking on krazypiratgurl and its ** me off. The review that you wrote for her story was completely out of line. Grammer, spelling, punctuation, all valid points but when pointing them out to a fledgling author, you shouldn't go out of your way to make them feel bad. It is not your place to be an A hole, or maybe it is, I don't really know you but I think that you should have been a bit more considerate. You have know idea where she is taking this story and you should be more open minded. I hope that you never come within ten feet of even thinking about reviewing my stories, but if you do, be assured that I will ignore you completely.

Angrilly yours
Kelly

That was wonderful! I liked how you have Olivia "addicted" to Alex and the treat system you set up...hehe, she lost weight from it. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for writing it.

I think I'm addicted to your stories - this one, the elevator - great characterization, good build up. Look forward to more AO stories from you.

See, this is what happens when you hang at the TWoP boards...HoYay everywhere, and ain't it great :o)

Three in one - I really enjoy your stories. A comfortable reading length, a tad quirky, good characterization. I hope you keep up writing this pairing.

Absolutley love it. Update soon.

amazingly awesome! I loved it so much. you really did an amazing job.