That was rather nice... brief, but it doesn't seem underfleshed. Interesting idea, and your use of description was wonderful. Nice, vivid imagery, there. Pairing was set up in a simple, effective, and reasonable manner. Really enjoyable.

O_O anazing as usual hun. Your writting is SO fucking beautiful *jelous* *grumble*... I waiat your next masterpiece with diminishing patients... *hugs* stunng, absolutly stunng!

Goodness... that was deep. Once again, Falsechaos, you've captured my undivided attention. I commend you.

How nice story. I hope this isn't a one shot. I hardly ever see this pairing. Done well at least.

Just one word, really, to describe it. Wow.

More please?

DracOnyx

Very interesting. The way you've written it the pairing's complicated, considered but unquestioning, compelling, jarring & morbidly fascinating. & then on top of that, there's Bakura's thing about Seth. It's like they're both shying away from something utterly tangled. Very interesting indeed.