*cries* God... So sad... This is about the 5th time I've read it, yet it's still fresh in my mind and still leaves an imprint on my heart. I feel so bad for the guy... How he regrets what he did at the end of his life... The last lines hit me the hardest though... *cries* Great job!

This tale is absolutely, utterly fantastic. I cried while reading it, which is an odd thing for me to do.

I like your characterazation in all cases, especially Link. As another reviewer said, it's interesting the way you managed to keep him silent - as in the game - while still having him "say" so much.

You know,I don't know how to say this, really, but I almost could actually hear Vaati in your words. As if they were actually coming from his mind-they were so perfect! At the end... I felt so much remorse for Vaati I could feel the slightest hint of tears in my eyes. :( lol Really Good Job!! ^-^

gasp, sadness. I cry. Seriously. Is there going to be more? or should i have read whether or not this is a one-shot and am asking stupid questions?

*cries in corner*

Inner Mika: HERE WE GO AGAIN! I hate it when she does this. *sighs* Well she loved the story and she thought it was sad as u can see here. Time to get out the crowbar... again.

Oh my God, this is so... wow. This is... WOW.
You have such a great amount of talent at your disposal, don't let it go to waste.

poor Vaati, nice story so sad though >

I like the idea of the "dis-inhibitor", that's quite original.

I've got other ideas about Vaati, myself, but then I think way too much. :) This is very well written. The one qualm I have is that it's not clear what exactly Vaati's last wish was/would have been. Was it to be forgiven? It would have more punch, I think, if it were slightly more explicit.

Link's characterization is nicely done, too. As in the game, he never speaks, but his actions speak for him. I like it that he's already forgiven Vaati, but will still do what he must--it's in keeping with the humble hero we know and love.

I hate being short on words, but I only have three at the moment--

I loved it!

*sniff* wow that was so touching and deep...*sniff* Vaati is like my fav character in minishcap even though he was freakn' hard to beat! lol anywhoo this was great! *cries* you did so well!

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Beautifully done.

Oh my...

This was written EXTREMLY well. I love the detail and how it's written in Vaati's POV. Very emotional aswell, it's as if the reader can feel the pain Vaati's going through. Awesome job, keep up the good work!

Wow. This story got a few small tears from me. Congrats on that. That isn't easy.
Very well written. I really liked it. So sad...Poor Vaati...

Very good, very angsty. I loved how you seemed to Seperate Vatti from his evil forms. Although you could have done a bit more with Ezlo. 8.5/10.

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