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Hitokiri Shinzui
2009-11-11 . chapter 6
ahh, poor naruto! sakura's such a bitch, all the way though...i love it, great fic!
XxBook KeeperxX
2009-09-27 . chapter 6
I congratulate you.Your story has NaruHina in it and yet it has made me favorites list.Its like a miracle.
Missjulia.Miriam
2009-09-27 . chapter 7
Fantastic. I like the second ending better than the first though. And earlier? Tat whole "I AM YOUR FATHER!" thing? Very nicely intergrated. Good job.
Minicoopermaverick
2009-09-20 . chapter 6
Hello. I have a request. Will you allow me to ask Matwilson83 on deviantart to turn this into a doujin?
bluewingedvampyre69
2009-09-02 . chapter 7
this is one of the best naruhina fic that i have read. i enjoyed it and i prefer happier endings that the sad ones.
NaruhinaDattebayo
2009-04-30 . chapter 7
wow. how sad. i cried most of the time. i really like it.
kisameisahhhhh
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
YOU KILLED SHINO!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!
my friends gonna kill you
kisameisahhhhh
2009-04-13 . chapter 5
i like this naruto
j7nX
2009-04-07 . chapter 7
This story was amazing and I really enjoyed reading it. I liked this epilogue better than the other one :) And I'm so happy that there's a happy ending :)
anemix
2009-04-03 . chapter 6
Through everything Naruto's been through and all of the hardships he's weathered, everyone still always treats Naruto as the bumbling idiot. He's there helping and saving everyone, yet they all take him for granted. I've wanted to read a story of his friends finding out all that he's been through for a long time. I even have an idea for a story that incorporates that idea, even though it is fundamentally different from yours. Even though it's a bit crude, your story plotline is a really good one.

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BUNNY
diff-r-ent-1
2009-03-14 . chapter 7
well i'm always a sucker for happy endings so naturally i like the second epilogue better then the first one ^_^
Graham Garrett
2009-03-01 . chapter 2
I just thought I would mention that the Ramen Man's name is Teuchi. They are Teuchi and Ayame. ANyway, nice story! It's got the right level of angst: minimal but enough to be evident.
Lord of the Phoenix
2009-02-10 . chapter 7
I love this story, its very funny during the actual chapters, and I loved the sad ending, but this chapter was awesome, sad and happy all in one, thanks for the beautiful read.
Captured.By.Insanity
2009-01-03 . chapter 7
Good Story!
ObsidianEbony
2008-10-13 . chapter 7
This was so sad!!
I nearly started crying when Sakura called Naruto a monster.

Hinata's really sweet. She just needs more self-confidence (in the anime, I mean. In this fic, she's perfect!).
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