  noy 12/16/02 . chapter 4 kute! |
 Winter Yuy 2/13/02 . chapter 4Great story! Very humerous at the end too!
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| kasbaka 12/29/01 . chapter 4 awwwwwww! that was an excellent fic EXCEPT THE FACT THAT TRUNKS AND MARRON WERE DATING! dont get me wrong i hate them all t/p t/m t/18 u name it! i say it to whatever i read when they make trunks go out w/ one of them so it is not just to you. BUT DOES ANYBODY KNOW WHERE I CAN FIND A FIC THAT DOESNT MAKE TRUNKS GO OUT WITH PAN, MARRON, 18, OR ANYBODY ELSE!but anywayz that was a great fic keep up the good work! |
| Bra Briefs-Vegeta 11/29/01 . chapter 4 torment for goten! poor poor goten...wait! i'm talking about me tormenting him! . |
| Bra 8/27/01 . chapter 4 Good very good |
| Mrs. Bra Son 6/26/01 . chapter 4 This story is realy good |
| Evil Anime Women 5/19/01 . chapter 4 Many compliments!very amusing!Like the little comedy added in!yet again Goten has the crap kicked out of him by Vegeta! |
| LovingAngel420 4/25/01 . chapter 1 I have not read this yet but I'm keeping it cause it's a Goten and Bra fiction! |
| Senira 4/18/01 . chapter 4 I love this fic! I thought that Goten and Bura were gonna sneak away, but instead he went and faced him! even though he lost...I loved the ending, this came out very well indeed! |
| Kiko Sukino 4/3/01 . chapter 4 YESSSS ha ha ha I know what Trunks mean...Bra has got lots of looks and she is very sweet too...but she is just like Bulma no kidding...wha ha ha ha Goten is going to be in lots of trouble from now on ha ha ha. Keep them coming I cannot wait for more. |
| HitokiriOTD 3/27/01 . chapter 3 more? |
| Lexly 3/22/01 . chapter 3 I like it... can't wait for more |
| HitokiriOTD 3/22/01 . chapter 2 HURRY UP! MORE! |
| Lexly 3/20/01 . chapter 2 Very interesting. It has a good start. Can't wait to see where this is going! |
| Bittersweet Symphony 3/20/01 . chapter 2 wow! keep on! |
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