 brightfairy8 2007-08-24 . chapter 12wow all those stories were soo cute! |
 brightfairy8 2007-08-23 . chapter 9aw...SO CUTE! |
 brightfairy8 2007-08-23 . chapter 4i'm lost what's going on in the story overall? |
 brightfairy8 2007-08-23 . chapter 2oh man, SCCARRYY! |
 CrAzY-SiLLy-Me 2007-08-13 . chapter 12Aww... ne-chan! I can imagine the whole scene happening! That ending was priceless! |
 AngolMoaChan 2007-02-09 . chapter 11XD
*falls over laughing*
I've definetly fallen in love with your story! I love oneshot collections-they're my favorites! But I was wondering...do you have a beta? I caught a lot of small mistakes, and was wondering if you had an editor. If you don't, I'd be happy to help! ^^ |
 L. C. Johnson 2007-02-06 . chapter 1Interesting idea... you're right about sasuke's reaction to finding out he's orochimaru's second choice. He wouldn't care about the body snatching thing... but being second to itachi... and orochimaru not being able to kill itachi... that would make him ditch orochimaru easily.
Your writing is fairly good, and I like the style, but more often than not it doesn't flow right... Is english your second language? |
 AngolMoaChan 2007-02-05 . chapter 2^^ That song was absolutely beautiful. I've got it on repeat now... |
 . 2006-12-30 . chapter 11 Oh hahaha, that was too cute. Interesting little drabble, with the vampires and the neck-chewing. xD |
 Mangosplashies 2006-12-28 . chapter 11hahaha, how sad! ...yet funny! hehehe |
 CrAzY-SiLLy-Me 2006-12-25 . chapter 11LOL. Nice job ne-chan! :)) I loved it! |
 Chiaretta Alice 2006-06-03 . chapter 10keep on doing ones like these
SRF98 |
 kunoichi haruhana 2006-06-02 . chapter 10how cute.. =) |
 0Aya0 2006-05-30 . chapter 10Sasuke jealous!! nyahahahaha. I love when he gets jealous :) |
 CrAzY-SiLLy-Me 2006-05-30 . chapter 10 Yep.. I agree with you when it comes to having Sasuke jealous. ^^ It's fun to do, see and read. Great job! Gamit ko PC nila Kuya Bry kya di ako naka login. ^^ kakatamad na eh. hehe |