 sophia666 2007-06-17 . chapter 3Interesting. Great writing. Are any of your Fred/Angelina/George/Alicia stories connected? Please update soon. |
 starXcrossed 2005-04-18 . chapter 3oh now that you explained it.. i understand y everyone was in tears.. i was on the verge of tears too.. man i LOVED this.. bad thing.. angelina and george not really my thing but i m cool with it.. but alicia seems like a ** though.. sorry that's wat i felt.. i love the humour on lee and katie.. he's so crazy about her... gonna propose to her ay?? got the ring too huh?? GREAT!! lovely cute.. but i think u should write the year.. before starting the story... easier to understand.. lol |
 angelface04 2005-04-17 . chapter 3another great chapter - but i do wish that it had been longer. :( *sniff* normally i wouldn't have said anything about the length, but when you said that it had been four pagers longer, it really made me want to read four pages more. *sniff*
anyway, robert...i'm having a feeling that his is robort montague, perhaps? maybe? maybe not? i'm completley wrong? i have a feeling that there's going to be some tension between him and angelina sometime later in the story. or does he like alicia?
*scratches head and sighs*
update soon, so i can stop thinking. :D
~angelface04~ |
 Trinity Cloud 2005-04-16 . chapter 3Update!Update!Update! |
 angelface04 2005-04-11 . chapter 2i can't believe i didn't review this chapter yet!
*GASP*
i really did mean to! i read it ages ago!
anyway, it's great - you've got an amazing writing style and this story does it justice. (woah, that makes a whole lotta NO sense...)
but anyway (i get off track a lot ;D) i really liked angelina's mum (well, not really because she was kinda a jerk, but she was very well written and characterized!)
it's nice to see something besides fred/angelina - even though i love them together - george is a nice break from the norm.
i'm still pretty darn confused with the first chapter - but i'll deal with it.
anyway, it's time for me to go - i'm hoping for an update soon? *begs* please?
~angelface04~ |
 LATRICE 2005-04-04 . chapter 2 YEAH ANOTHER CHAPTER I'M SO HAPPY AND FOREVER IN YOUR DEBT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
 LittleWriterGirl 2005-04-02 . chapter 2The first chapter was confusing. But, this is good! I like it! Update soon! |
 Latrice 2005-03-31 . chapter 1 I really liked it. Can you pliease update as soon as possible |
 starXcrossed 2005-03-27 . chapter 1 Hey sorry to lazy to log in.. well anyways.. i was super confused.. but i think it's a angelina/george/alicia triangle thingy thing right?? i think i get it now so PLEASE continue... he he |
 suckerforgrint 2005-03-27 . chapter 1 o awesome start. |
 PerfectWorld 2005-03-24 . chapter 1Awe, Angie!
I was kind of confused...
I get it now, really sappy.
I love it.
You've really got something...
It touched me.
-Ariana |
 angelface04 2005-03-24 . chapter 1you've got a great start, although i was rather confuzed. :S i think i'm kinda getting it now though...something about an alicia/george/angelina love triangle thingamabobber? yeah...
so, nah, it wasn't too bad. ;)
update soon!
~angelface04~ |