Beautiful story. You really should keep writing. SW fanficdom needs more stories like yours.

Interesting view on what happened. Not what I thought would happen, but I liked it non the less.

That was a really good story. I don't know much about Star Wars but from what I do know I can tell that this fic was really good. Did I say it was really good yet? Ha ha ha! I'm going to read your other stuff now!!!

I liked that story!!!!! In my fics Luke is younger and smaller than Leia too.....

I just went back through my rewiews and realized that I hadn't reviewed you back like I had promised. I'm sorry!!!

I enjoyed reading your fic!!!! It was very well written!

sad but true

thats sooooooo sad! It made me want to cry! Wonderful job, i always love to read your stories, keep up the good work!

Hey MJS! Nice to see a familiar face. Oops, sounding like 3P0 a bit there... can't have that. ;) Great job! While I think its most likely that Amidala lived beyond the birth of the twins, I still enjoyed this. It was very well written. I really liked this!

Cool. Not bad at all.

great story!!! excellent!!!

Nice portrayal emotions, but, overall, slightly unrealistic.

I can't e-mail anyone I don't know, so this is the only way we can communicate. What do you want sorted out? Let me know. I really liked this story, and I think it would be nice on my site, once it's up. And, yes, I do love writing anything about the prequel trilogy, but, not just Ami/Ani.

Hey I think I've read this one before!?!! But I liked it then and I like it now!! ding, ding 10 points!!

A very powerful story! I liked how you portrayied Leia knowing her mother but no Luke. I also liked how you had her die in Obi-Wan's arms. Very sad. I'm building a fanfiction site, and I was wondering if I may post this story on it. May I? Please!!!???

That was so sad. A very good story. The only tiny thing I might suggest, is that she seems to die very suddenly...maybe give us an earlier clue that the labor is difficult? Your insights into Amidala are good -- she's doesn't want to take revenge, she wants to take action. Nice work.