The title gives this piece a whole other dimension.

It was so... dark. One of the best drabbles I've ever read.

Aww...man...that was really sad...

I need some fluff... In the meantime, give yourself a cookie just for being a great author!

wow. every sentence in this drabble is heartbreakingly perfect. awesome job!

This is wonderful! The way you write clearly paints a picture of what is happening.

Good job,
~Kioko

I dunno. Your use of words to craft an image was amazing, but the shortness of it made it very confusing. (Ok, this partly has to do with the fact that I only have the foggiest images of KH now, but we'll ignore that) It just kind of trails off open-ended, like it doesn't have any closure... I mean, it's a drabble and all(I'm assuming it is one) but this describes an actual (seemingly) important event and stuff, and doesn't give any further information about it at all. Frustrating.

Agh, I don't think that was very clear. Heck, I don't even really know what I'm talking about. I liked the word thalassa. ^^;