Really good. It could have used a bit of polishing, but I liked it.

One problem that has already been pointed out is that you listed Miyako as Yamaki. If you are reading this it would be nice if you fixed that.

But it's still good. I think I might use this idea myself. Of course I won't plagiarize, and I'll say where I got the idea.

Sorry, I did not read your Fanfic yet, but

I searched for a Fanfic between the characters Daisuke M./Davis from Adventure 02 and M. (Mitsuo) Yamaki from Tamers, and this came up.

I'm not sure if you can change this: but for the characters involved part on the top you accidentally used M. Yamaki for Miyako I. (Inoue)/Yolei.

Maybe you got confused because Yamaki sounds like Miyako switched around or maybe because you thought the M. stood for Miyako and Yamaki was her last name?

Well, anyways, I thought a Digimon continuity crossover Fanfic where Daisuke, Iori, or Miyako confronts Yamaki or Janyu about the way they deal with Digimon would be interesting, since those three Zero Two characters are the most sensitive about the

ethical/unethical treatment of Digimon and most reluctant to kill even evil Digimon, and since the Tamers characters are the harshest in the way they deal with Digimon.

Aw a cute little Daiyako. Good story

Great story. are you going to write more? I hope so! :)

I liked it a lot. here ain t many friendship storys for these characters. one of my fav should I say. thanx for writing this n I think I really should read more about CIPA cos i feel some what stupid b'cos of not knowing about this disease

aw... kind of sad. but i guess not feeling physical pain could have its benefits. lol i love the walking around on a broken leg bit! i should probably look up some info on CIPA...

This story is so sad. Can't wait for the next chapter

*sniffles* Really sweet fanfic you got there. For once, a Davis/Yolei friendship fic. We don't see that too often. Apparently, you're very good at it.

Very nice friendship fanfic. Keep writing more if you're thinking any.

*puts story in C2 Archive*