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| SaraSidle123 2007-12-16 ch 7, | abuseA stone room in a brick house. Sara's kidnapper had a scar on his chest looking like an eagle on the world |
| NT AND CSI fan 2007-09-26 ch 15, | abusethis is really good...hey, i think i'm the 100th reviewer...cool. I am inspired by your intelligence in the the storyline. |
| Lady Abstraction 2006-01-15 ch 7, | abuseI'm on chapter 7 of Tangled. In that kiss I actually got a happy/nervous feeling in my stomach! That was so wonderful! and your mini challenge... A large adobe house. A scar on a muscular chest. An eagle on top of the world. A room made of stone. My guess would be Officer Garcia...*shrug* But so far i LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! fabulous! |
| Taletha 2005-12-12 ch 15, | abuseExcellent! You are a wonderful storyteller! Good job! It'll always be one of my Favorites! |
| Taletha 2005-12-12 ch 14, | abuseWhew! That all happened really fast. Now I'm just curious as to what Sara could have possibly done to this guy for him to completely nut out this way? And please, let Grissom be okay! And Greg too! |
| Taletha 2005-12-12 ch 13, | abuseGood grief! I'm dizzy from all of the excitement, but nothing - I mean nothing will stop from getting to the next chapter! This guy is a nutcase! Wonder what all this is about and why he's focused on Sara? |
| Taletha 2005-12-12 ch 12, | abuseMan! This is so good! I can hardly stop long enough to review cause I want to get to the next chapter already! This chapter rocks! |
| Taletha 2005-12-12 ch 11, | abuseYah!(I'm jumping up and down but you can't see me!) Happy these were able to connect - you know what I mean! If Grissom were my man...I would...hm (dreamy look on my face.) Oh, I digress. I would be possessive of him too! Can't wait to read what's going on with the case. And how is Sara's kidnapping related? |
| Taletha 2005-12-12 ch 10, | abuseAw, background. I was wondering in the beginning what Sara was irritated with Grissom about - but with them, it could be so many things. Wonder why he wanted her to switch to days? Because they couldn't get along anymore (can't imagine that, they are made for one another!) of maybe so that they could pursue a relationship in earnest? I'm going for the latter. So what if I want to live in fantasy land! I'm sure that Sara will be thrilled that Grissom tracked her down again. It's really fun that he can though! |
| Taletha 2005-12-11 ch 9, | abuseSo things were going fine until I read this line: Finally Grissom spoke up, “Did you know that there are approximately 232 insect eggs in a jar of tomato sauce?” Sara stopped, with a fork of noodles halfway to her mouth. Slowly she set it back on her plate. “Thanks, Griss.” “They’re completely harmless. Heck, there are people who eat fried scorpions. I’ve never tried them, but mealworms in rice—“ I mean, seriously - is that true? Please write back and let me know. I need to know if I should throw away the cans in my cupboard and never - I repeat - never buy it again. So, drop me a line, will you? |
| Taletha 2005-12-11 ch 8, | abuseAnother twist! And the plot thickens! What in the world is going on? And how in the world are Grissom and Sara going to live under the same roof? I can't wait to read what happens next! Maybe Ecklie is the killer/rapist. I know, I know - I just don't like him. |
| Taletha 2005-12-11 ch 7, | abuseOkay, so they officer is an idiot. What in the world was he thinking? Now I think he was way too stupid to kidnap Sara. I like what's going on between Grissom and Sara. Still have no clue as to who the napper is! |
| Taletha 2005-12-11 ch 6, | abuseEven more confused now. Surely, the Officer must have known that his DNA would show up on the bonds if he touched her. Hmm...unless this is a set up? Possibly by a lover of his wife's. Anyways, I feel terrible for Sara. It's bad enough to be assaulted, but to not remember by whom or that it even happened would completely freak me out. Though, I must abmit, I like Sara's sass with Grissom. She keeps him on his toes. |
| Taletha 2005-12-11 ch 5, | abuseHmm. I'm completely baffled. Trying to figure out what the kidnapper's agenda is. Why he let her go. Hmm. And what's going on in Sara's head right now. This ought to be interesting. |
| Taletha 2005-12-11 ch 4, | abuseThank God, Sara was found alive. But this is way too early in the story so I know this is not the end of it. I'm very intrigued. Great job keeping up the suspense. |